All Comments on 'Tame the Untamable Ch. 05'

by ChynaMarie

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
great

hi great story please finish, you have a great talent only complaint is the finish to them is abrupt, i think you need at least 1/2 chapters for round up of story. Keep up the good work

NightpleasureNightpleasureover 12 years ago

Great as usual, it's just a little short but I enjoyed it all the same.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Messed up!

Why did she have to get pregnant by that bastard? Unless Cade came to Boston and slept with her without her remembering

AshleyLovebookAshleyLovebookover 12 years ago
NOOOOO

It was too short and man she is going to have her hands full telling Cade about her having a baby by Jack

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
omg!!!

i can't belive it, i need more and soon

honeybreehoneybreeover 12 years ago
Wow...don't know how I feel about this yet...

What a tangle web that is being weaved here. Poor Loral it is one thing not to be pregnant by the man you love (especially if it is your first born) but to be pregnant by a racist asshole. Wow....I can't wait to see what happens next, hopefully they can make it work. I mean people have kids by people they use to love and truly dislike all the time...lol so the story is realistic

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
eh....

too short

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
MORE MORE

more more please more more please!!

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
Why the baby daddy drama????

We already know Jack is going to be an asshole when he finds out he was right. Why are we even going there? We don't like him....no one does!!!! Can we wrap that situation up with some serious drama and have this pair work on getting it together?!?!?! Please??????????????????????????????

Sometimes bringing in a pregnancy is just a damn drag!!

My other issue concerns a previous comment regarding Loral holding out for marriage instead of giving in. I say she didn't give in; she was just enjoying a good shagging. We don't condemn men for that. Why harshly judge a woman for the same thing? Sometimes a good fuck and a marriage proposal DON'T go hand in hand. Dig it.

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxover 12 years ago
lucy? you got some splanin to do!!

I can sense her first words now.... "see...what had happened wuz?"

LaFemmeWildcatLaFemmeWildcatabout 12 years ago
yay!

Annabel Marie is actually the name for my first daughter! i'm so happy it was in this story!

ChynaMarieChynaMarieabout 12 years agoAuthor
i'm thinking....

i should finish this story lol

magiczeesmagiczeesabout 12 years ago
Yes you should

Miss. Chyna and hurry please.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Ruined

Great way to destroy a story.... Still can't believe you wrote the chapter like this...

mrskelleymrskelleyover 11 years ago
Wow.

Now this is going to be interesting. Hmmm.....Jake where are you?

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
ruined !!!!!!!!

REALLY...I can't believe this sad turn of events.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
Response to ChynaMarie

No shit!!!!!!

EuphoriaSlam69EuphoriaSlam69about 11 years ago
Fucking HATE it!

Suck suck suck suck suckity suck suck!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
Great story...

I hope all is well with you. I love this story. Well, that's life crap happens. At the time Lorel was content to be with Jake even though he turned out to be an a-hole. Now that she is with Cade she has to accept the fact that she is pregnant with Jake's baby and like she surmised it's not the baby's fault. I always like reading stories with a twist or real life instances. Not all love stories end with a fairy tale ending. It's simply not real. I think Cade and Lorel will be okay but they have some serious things to talk about and work thru. Again realistic. Please update!!!!

ZionixZionixalmost 11 years ago
Pregnant Loral...

I think it's Cade's baby because she fucked him three months ago and the baby is three months along.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Shocked!

Please, please, please, I KNOW you will finish this wonderful story! She and Cade did get together, so I'm praying for her sake, his sake and the baby's sake, it IS Cades child!!!

Cindi47Cindi47over 10 years ago
Time

Hi Chyna Marie,

I did notice the time lapse when you finished the last chapter! I hope you and yours are well and you will be able to complete this for us shortly!!

(shocked)

chocolatesistachocolatesistaalmost 10 years ago
came across this and i had to read it

Omg I love it all please come back and finish. I love your writing and editor.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
waiting patiently

This story is too good to leave it like this... Waiting patiently for the next chapter... Please...

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Finish this story ASAP!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Finish your story please

ChynaMarieChynaMarieover 8 years agoAuthor
Im going to finish all of them!!!!!

I'm working on all of my stories.

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