by ChynaMarie
hi great story please finish, you have a great talent only complaint is the finish to them is abrupt, i think you need at least 1/2 chapters for round up of story. Keep up the good work
Great as usual, it's just a little short but I enjoyed it all the same.
Why did she have to get pregnant by that bastard? Unless Cade came to Boston and slept with her without her remembering
It was too short and man she is going to have her hands full telling Cade about her having a baby by Jack
What a tangle web that is being weaved here. Poor Loral it is one thing not to be pregnant by the man you love (especially if it is your first born) but to be pregnant by a racist asshole. Wow....I can't wait to see what happens next, hopefully they can make it work. I mean people have kids by people they use to love and truly dislike all the time...lol so the story is realistic
We already know Jack is going to be an asshole when he finds out he was right. Why are we even going there? We don't like him....no one does!!!! Can we wrap that situation up with some serious drama and have this pair work on getting it together?!?!?! Please??????????????????????????????
Sometimes bringing in a pregnancy is just a damn drag!!
My other issue concerns a previous comment regarding Loral holding out for marriage instead of giving in. I say she didn't give in; she was just enjoying a good shagging. We don't condemn men for that. Why harshly judge a woman for the same thing? Sometimes a good fuck and a marriage proposal DON'T go hand in hand. Dig it.
I can sense her first words now.... "see...what had happened wuz?"
Annabel Marie is actually the name for my first daughter! i'm so happy it was in this story!
Great way to destroy a story.... Still can't believe you wrote the chapter like this...
I hope all is well with you. I love this story. Well, that's life crap happens. At the time Lorel was content to be with Jake even though he turned out to be an a-hole. Now that she is with Cade she has to accept the fact that she is pregnant with Jake's baby and like she surmised it's not the baby's fault. I always like reading stories with a twist or real life instances. Not all love stories end with a fairy tale ending. It's simply not real. I think Cade and Lorel will be okay but they have some serious things to talk about and work thru. Again realistic. Please update!!!!
I think it's Cade's baby because she fucked him three months ago and the baby is three months along.
Please, please, please, I KNOW you will finish this wonderful story! She and Cade did get together, so I'm praying for her sake, his sake and the baby's sake, it IS Cades child!!!
Hi Chyna Marie,
I did notice the time lapse when you finished the last chapter! I hope you and yours are well and you will be able to complete this for us shortly!!
(shocked)
Omg I love it all please come back and finish. I love your writing and editor.
This story is too good to leave it like this... Waiting patiently for the next chapter... Please...
I'm working on all of my stories.