All Comments on 'Asteroid Patrol: The Replacement'

what a lovely story, I really enjoyed it.

Cue the "Star Cops" theme, please *<i>It don't Come Easy<i>*. Great story. No time to quibble, just time to enjoy.

just a suggestion tho. in future stories, make sure when you change pov, that you dont lose the reader. several times when you changed from one characters viewpoint to another, i had to reread it because it didnt make sense and then realised it was no longer the same character talking. otherwise, an awesome read!

I lucked into this wonderful story, and I am so happy I did. It has almost everything required for a perfect space opera of the highest order. I can't wait to keep reading the rest of the story in full.

Part 2 in this series was a story like this recommendation and I followed the link. I'm glad I did.

Fun story, even with the holes in it. Jumping a patrolman/patrolwoman up to Sargent and skipping over a senior patrolman would cause all kinds of problems. I'm not sure why he thought using his pistol was better than a blaster? Captain would have set his blaster to stun, not kill, lol. Still liked the story and hope part two is as good.