All Comments on 'Taken'

by Bethyboo

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Amazing!

I really love your writing. You have a wonderful imagination and you have an incredible way with words.

You weave wonderful stories and take the reader on a journey they can't get off of until the end.

Keep writing and I will keep reading.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
What crap!

“That is exactly the position I wanted you in...save your strength, you're going to need it for later. I am going to take your ass, rip into you and you will feel like you are dying, for a few minutes, and then, you will beg me for more.”

Then he puts her in her car and buckles the seat belt.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Absolute Trash!

Wont be reading this author anymore!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
I actually enjoyed this.

I have read your writing before and I have always enjoyed it. This one was walked a fine line, but when all was said and done I liked it.

Also, your reader is amazing! I could get lost in his voice!

BethybooBethybooover 12 years agoAuthor
My Reader

Thanks for your comment. I just realized that I had forgotten to give credit to him in the text of the story.

Thanks to Photoman4u2 for putting audio to this story.

And yes, I agree, one can get lost in his voice.

ohsweetvioletohsweetvioletover 12 years ago

Enjoyed the story and the reader's voice especially. Very sexy... 5

photoman4u2photoman4u2over 12 years ago
My Pleasure!

BethyBoo, as always it was my distinct pleasure to try to bring life to another one of your stories.

I only hope that I do your words justice. Thank you for asking me to lend my voice.

I hope to do more in the future.

Photoman4u2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
SecretSub

OMG this was so so horny. I am incredibly turned on now. Love your work!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Bethyboo should have read it herself.

It is distracting to have a male voice.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

This is sick. Should be a rape warning. Rape is NEVER okay and should NEVER be the basis of an erotic story, especially with no warning.

xSilverxBulletxxSilverxBulletxalmost 2 years ago

Omg absolutely lovvvvvvvvveeeed this!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

You make gross sounds with your mouth or throat!!!

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