All Comments on 'Beauty and the Beast Ch. 01'

too short

Well written, but so far it is a retelling of the Disney version of the Beauty and the Beast story.

I'm hoping the next chapter gives me something alittle different. Something that will separate your story from others and make it truly yours.

I congratulate and wish you much luck as you venture into the world of being a published author.

I'd comment similarly to the others in saying that it is so far an exact re-telling of the Disney movie. It is well-written maand if you can make the story yours here on out, I'd be happy to read on. But you will have to leave the road you started down and tell an original and engaging version of the tale if you want to keep readers. Good luck and I look forward to seeing where you take this well-loved tale.

Hey guys, yah I know this is so far an exact retelling, but it was only the introduction. I'm about half through with chapter two (multiple pages btw for the one who said this was too short). I'm gonna warn you though, next chapter has nonconsent/reluctance as well as bondage.... If you are squeamish, I urge you not to read it...

Ps I'm on my phone messaging you and it won't let me log in to literotica to comment, therefore, I am posting as anonymous.

So far this is really good. And Im looking forward to the more you add to it.