All Comments on 'Nate and Ariana'

by CheriSM

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coastalguycoastalguyalmost 12 years ago
Very hot

Absolutely loved the story. It hit all the right cords.You're a very talented and skilled writer.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Amazing

Ok, you are an amazing writer! I've got this thing for nerds, like I don't even know why! I'm only in high school, and I want a nerd, sexually and even as a boyfriend! Write another story, but continue with the male nerd, maybe try and get the girl to be a crush he's had??? PLEASE CONTINUE :) love love love the writing

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Very Good!

The female perspective is a wonderful thing when the writing quality is where your's is. I look forward to reading more of your work as this was the first.

Gazza6969Gazza69699 months ago

Very sensual and erotic. Well written by an expert wordsmith.

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