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Act Naturally

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by Anonymous

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by norcal6212/04/11

Must comment to increase the previous score to 5+.

A great read of magic and reality. Well done story!

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by peggytwitty12/18/11

Thank You

I just need to say thank you for the entertainment! You have not lost your twisted and wonderfully original mind set.
Greatly appreciated
PT

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by Dick8801/30/12

Totally saw it coming!

It pretty much ended like I thought it would. Not much sex but the great story more than makes up for it, very well told. Keep writing.

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by Anonymous02/04/12

speaking of fantasy

this is fullblown. i think we all want a chance to right things up in our lives that we did to ourselves. since we know that there is no such thing as a time travel, this will work.

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by Anonymous03/18/12

Very good...

Hadn't checked your sight lately so missed these gems. Making old story plots for cheating come out differently...Great!





Ronald R Wood

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by Anonymous04/25/12

Masterful

Entertaining read, humorous and smart, thanks for submitting.

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by Fullboost08/14/12

Movie

This could easily be made into an awesome movie!

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by Anonymous09/30/12

Hard to enjoy a story starring an asshole

Couldn't even get halfway through the first page. The protagonist was such an absolute, complete asshole.

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by Anonymous10/06/12

Brilliant

Well done. Great story, well thought out and everything flowed. Excellent

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by 49greg11/13/12

Great Story

I read this story some time ago and then forgot the name and author's name, just came on to it by chance and I'm glad I did, it's a great story.

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by ythebadger12/29/12

Definitely one of the very best

Wonderful plotting - superb telling. Totally engrossing.

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by Anonymous01/23/13

Excellent the second time too!

HDK, I truly wish you would write more. This was and still is a fine story with just the right touch.

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by theanalist07/26/13

loved it

great concept and execution. I just read a comment disregarding the story. you need to be treated for ADHD so you could finish reading it instead of stopping in the middle and see how good it is.

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by Anonymous09/21/13

YOU

are still the best.

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by Anonymous09/27/13

Why

THIS JUNK exist

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by Anonymous02/17/14

I think I liked it.

But I'm still not sure what happened. You have the number of the hypno doctor?

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by Fiftyshadesofme02/19/14

:)

Honestly the best story I've ever read.

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by tazz31702/19/14

WHEN ONES PLANS ARE JUMBLED UP

its always good to have A...B....C or even more if needed, TK U MLJ LV NV

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by SELSTIM06/24/14

SO.......

The moral of the story is....treat your family as if someone is always watching? Sounds good to me. Of course, as fast as we are losing our civil rights it won't be long before the government has camera's in all our homes, anyway. They'll just say it's for our own protection and safety. Plus we'll get a break on our health and home insurance. I've read all your stories and loved them all. Then I wait a few years and read them again and still get a chuckle out of them. A true testament of an excellent author and all his works. Thank you

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