All Comments on 'The Good Doctor: Origins'

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totalyconfusedtotalyconfusedover 12 years ago
Uhm.

What the hell happened? You should probably read what you post before posting.

secret_readersecret_readerover 12 years agoAuthor
My mistake

Yes, I apologize.

There should be a break in there to indicate a passage of time/change in setting.

I've submitted the edited version.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Dry opinion

Epic beginning, mysterious setup. Loved it. Mistake is acknowledged and hopefully will not discourage the author from unfolding the story with fast pace.

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