All Comments on 'Freight Train to Morning'

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twelveoonetwelveooneover 12 years ago
Well hello

High point

Womb of morning coffee

Most of the ends are too expected

does there come a time

when it’s all done and said?

but having little hope,

connecting the same dots,

as if the dots are connected for me

but I gave it a five

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