All Comments on 'My Best Friend Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

MORE! And soon!!

Please? =D

JezellenJezellenover 12 years ago

i hope you continue this story. i want to see how they both will "crash" or who will be the one to admit it first. great story.

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmover 12 years ago
Talk about confusion

As I listen to Janis Joplin sing "Try", I wonder how this chick got it confused. Sex always changes the game.....like a bio-chemical reaction when you mix things that perhaps shouldn't be mixed?

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

You need an editor. This feels very rushed. I don't even know the girl's name. Take your time this could be a great story.

got2luvmelgot2luvmelover 12 years ago
I Love

'Best Friends to Lovers' romances but I have to agree with anon on the editing...and, what is her name?

NyghtlyEmbraceNyghtlyEmbraceover 12 years ago
Too Rushed

Storyline has great potential, but you went from talking about your sexual partners to 6 months later, you're saying you had no idea Quinn was so good. (In two sentences). Wheres the build up and sexual tension? What's the girls name?

brownskinnedcutiebrownskinnedcutieover 6 years ago

I love the beginning!!

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