All Comments on 'Sister-in-law Comes to Stay'

good so far but we all know he has to fuck both sisters and in chapter 3 add the wifes mother

The general idea is good, but the writing could use some editing. Some areas seem rushed, and some incomplete.

this is a great story the concept is good and i think you should write more chapters to it

A quick, little, low-down & dirty, 'hit it & quit it ' liaison . Life gets that way sometimes. This is not a smart move on narrator's part but it was a ' hotstory '. Watch your English faux paus - if you want to take it to the next level. TY for the reality break .

I can see this happening.

My personal experience with my SIL was that it took 5 years of sexual tension building up between us. One day we were alone swimming in our pool. We just looked at each other and jumped into each other's arms spouses be damned.

Perhaps he could talk his wife into a threesome on Thursday nights after bingo.

Thanks for the good read.

Thanks.

This story is so perfect. I love MotoGP and petite caramel skinned girls are so my type. Great writing too, so happy I found this.

Frankly, I'm a 'I don't care what color her skin is' kind of guy, but I do like a tight pussy. I think the condenses is that you add 3 or 4 more chapters to this story. Tia must have liked your cock, discussed it with the owner, your wife, and come with some kind of share plan. Keep writing.

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