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by SoullessCynner10/25/11

Holy Shit

That's it. That's all I can say. I'm... speechless... This story is amazing, and very well written. I can't wait to read more on this. 5 Stars.

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by Anonymous10/25/11

Aaahhhh

hurry hurry hurry post more pleeeaassseeee!!!!!

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by Anonymous10/25/11

Loved it!!

Fantastic, hope we don't have to wait to long.

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by lonesomedove6610/25/11

Wow!! Just wow

But... you stopped arrggghhh hurry what happens next

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by honestsoul10/25/11

FANTASTIC!!!

Exactly right! This is what paranormal fiction is supposed to b like.5 stars, no question about it...Pls continue.eagerly awaiting d next post...

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by nomoretears0010/25/11

Oh wow

Oh wow, oh wow! Boy, you sure packed one helluva punch in that! Very, very interested in this and can't wait for more. Wow.

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by StarMAP10/25/11

Oh my gosh!! I'm like, your biggest fan!

Lol I'm currently reading Ellis and Dav's story and to find you are now on Lit is AMAZING! I liked Velaku's story so I'll follow it here. You are amazing! Lol this is the only place i can actually give you feed back coz i'm not a full member of G.A :(

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by julri10/25/11

Very original and good.

you have drawn me into your world, now i can't wait to continue finding out more. I have a zillion questions that i am sure will be answered as you reveal more layers. good read, thank you for the post, so far so good.
J~

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by talismania10/25/11

Intriguing

It will be interesting to see how Velaku's youth and inexperience play out as he carries through on his revenge. There's a lot more to be discovered about your world and characters! :)

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by ICEWIND12510/25/11

HOPE

I LOVE SO MUCH WILL THERE BE MORE OF IT

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by kla694210/25/11

Omg wow

Awesome beginning I can't wait for more AMAZING!!!!

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by Anonymous10/25/11

WOW!!!!!

Yikes you have my full attention. Please post soon and longer. I need to know what happens next. What a way to begin a story!!!!

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by Rahtid10/25/11

iam fully hooked....MORE!!!!!

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by Cia8110/25/11

Thank you!

I was right; readers over here are great. So wow, thanks for all the wonderful comments! Let me see if I can give a few answers to the questions. This is a complete novella length story and will post every few days (already submitted Ch. 2). When it's done I also have a 2nd Carthera story(novel length)done and a third that is partly written. So... lots of content to come from me. The chapters will remain short but I hope the guaranteed fast posting schedule will help appease readers.

Again, thanks so much for all the great comments and feedback! I hope everyone continues to enjoy Velaku's story.

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by prostock6910/25/11

Another WOW!!!!

This first chapter reached out and grabbed me. I couldn't stop reading even if I wanted to. I am most definitely intrigued to read more.

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by oneoflifesjewels10/25/11

BAM!

Right between the eyes, right from the start! I generally like longer chapters, but it sounds like you will give it to us fast and hard. Fast and hard is good too. lol Keep up the good work.

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by avidreader_0110/27/11

wow

Ok, tell me more, tell me more :)

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by Faeezah10/28/11

This is legit awesome!

Just what I needed to brighten my Friday. So glad you have plans to make this story last.

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by fukmi_allnite10/29/11

Gasterflabbered.

Started off with a bang, now you have to keep the momentum. Great start, good luck.

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by frosty_hore810/30/11

thank you

adrenalin's gots my hearts pumping like a freight train. thankgoodness chapter 2 is already posted.

onwards and upwards ;0)

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by Anonymous11/04/11

Great start!

Off to read the rest now. Anticipation fully engaged!!

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by whenwilli11/22/11

Well I be.......

Can't take time to write much. Must continue reading. Love it!

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by Contest4Jen11/23/11

Hmmm lucky chapter 2 is already posted or I would have gone crazy from the anticipation! Onward I read!

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by Anonymous07/16/12

estoy con el que escribio antes si el proximo capitulo no hubiese salido ya me estubiera muriendo ..... como sea me gusta y estoy segura que voy a seguir leyendo bye XD

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