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Twice The Charm Ch. 01

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous10/26/11

I like(:

Please continue.

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by Queen_Vicki10/26/11

mmmm

I am liking this already, please write more.

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by Anonymous10/26/11

GOOD START SO ARE U GOING TO BE LIKE THE REST?

BECAUS THE REST B WRIYING THESE SHORT AZZ STOREIES THAT I CAN'T STAND SO PLEASE IF U FELL THAT U R ONE OF THEM DON'T POST UE SHIT

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by Anonymous10/26/11

*****

Good start.

Five.

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by Anonymous10/26/11

Nice start !

Great to have a new talented IR writer onboard. And my guess is that Scott is the father of cute little Star.

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by Anonymous10/27/11

*****

Very good start.............

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by Soul_child10/27/11

Hmmm

Looks very promising!!!!

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by Anonymous10/27/11

Love this!

I've been waiting for a new steamy interracial couple to read up on. I'm loving the way this is going. I can't wait for the next update and to see who is Star's father.
*Sidenote-I hope readers are smart enough to figure out who Star's father is by now.(Smh)

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by EroticLitKitty10/27/11

Nice start!

I've got a weakness for gingers, so I can't wait for what's next!

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by Nightpleasure10/27/11

next chapter

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by Anonymous10/27/11

Good start

This is good first chapter. I probably won't read anymore because I don't like stories about old flames reconnecting. I don't like going backwards.

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by hisangelbeauty10/27/11

more

what a place to stop geeze, loving this story more please

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by got2luvmel10/27/11

Aight

start but IDK how I feel about it, there just wasn't enough in this chapter to sway me either way despite the obvious underlying fact about Star. If I were to continue reading, her conception drop would be why. But side note, I too am a ginger lover and glad to see someone else mix one with a black woman...YUM!

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by Anonymous10/27/11

Ok not too bad! If that's his daughter like I think it is you've got the dates a little screwed but all in all a pretty decent start for a story. Will be waiting to read the next chapter.

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by bbwbeautykiss10/27/11

Great Start!

I'm looking forward to more!

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by jazz119010/28/11

more more please

cant wait to read more from you.. i cant wait for him to realize that's his child..

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by Anonymous11/10/11

good start

but why hasn't this guy realized that Star is his daughter. Manni has dropped so many clues and he seems oblivious to them. Thanks

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by THELOVELY1GLO11/20/11

Good

chemistry between them, yet he is sooo slow about his daughter-same eyes and age of their break-up. Looking forward to more of this funny series.

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by Anonymous12/10/11

this guy has some serious control issues.

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by Anonymous12/16/11

She has given in WAY too easily

And I'm sure he can't be so ignorant as to not know Star is his?

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by Anonymous07/21/13

So obvious

that this little girl is his? Ugh!!! Also the dialogue are quite poor, and it took him what an hour to get invited back at he rplace? Really?

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by AMHJ8909/24/13

Like is he intentionally ignoring the fact that star is his or is he like just that clueless

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