Twice The Charm Ch. 01

I like(:

Please continue.

mmmm

I am liking this already, please write more.

GOOD START SO ARE U GOING TO BE LIKE THE REST?

BECAUS THE REST B WRIYING THESE SHORT AZZ STOREIES THAT I CAN'T STAND SO PLEASE IF U FELL THAT U R ONE OF THEM DON'T POST UE SHIT

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Good start.

Five.

Nice start !

Great to have a new talented IR writer onboard. And my guess is that Scott is the father of cute little Star.

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Very good start.............

Hmmm

Looks very promising!!!!

Love this!

I've been waiting for a new steamy interracial couple to read up on. I'm loving the way this is going. I can't wait for the next update and to see who is Star's father.
*Sidenote-I hope readers are smart enough to figure out who Star's father is by now.(Smh)

Nice start!

I've got a weakness for gingers, so I can't wait for what's next!

next chapter

Good start

This is good first chapter. I probably won't read anymore because I don't like stories about old flames reconnecting. I don't like going backwards.

more

what a place to stop geeze, loving this story more please

Aight

start but IDK how I feel about it, there just wasn't enough in this chapter to sway me either way despite the obvious underlying fact about Star. If I were to continue reading, her conception drop would be why. But side note, I too am a ginger lover and glad to see someone else mix one with a black woman...YUM!

Ok not too bad! If that's his daughter like I think it is you've got the dates a little screwed but all in all a pretty decent start for a story. Will be waiting to read the next chapter.

Great Start!

I'm looking forward to more!

more more please

cant wait to read more from you.. i cant wait for him to realize that's his child..

good start

but why hasn't this guy realized that Star is his daughter. Manni has dropped so many clues and he seems oblivious to them. Thanks

Good

chemistry between them, yet he is sooo slow about his daughter-same eyes and age of their break-up. Looking forward to more of this funny series.

this guy has some serious control issues.

She has given in WAY too easily

And I'm sure he can't be so ignorant as to not know Star is his?