I am liking this already, please write more.
BECAUS THE REST B WRIYING THESE SHORT AZZ STOREIES THAT I CAN'T STAND SO PLEASE IF U FELL THAT U R ONE OF THEM DON'T POST UE SHIT
Great to have a new talented IR writer onboard. And my guess is that Scott is the father of cute little Star.
Very good start.............
Looks very promising!!!!
I've been waiting for a new steamy interracial couple to read up on. I'm loving the way this is going. I can't wait for the next update and to see who is Star's father.
*Sidenote-I hope readers are smart enough to figure out who Star's father is by now.(Smh)
I've got a weakness for gingers, so I can't wait for what's next!
This is good first chapter. I probably won't read anymore because I don't like stories about old flames reconnecting. I don't like going backwards.
what a place to stop geeze, loving this story more please
start but IDK how I feel about it, there just wasn't enough in this chapter to sway me either way despite the obvious underlying fact about Star. If I were to continue reading, her conception drop would be why. But side note, I too am a ginger lover and glad to see someone else mix one with a black woman...YUM!
Ok not too bad! If that's his daughter like I think it is you've got the dates a little screwed but all in all a pretty decent start for a story. Will be waiting to read the next chapter.
I'm looking forward to more!
cant wait to read more from you.. i cant wait for him to realize that's his child..
but why hasn't this guy realized that Star is his daughter. Manni has dropped so many clues and he seems oblivious to them. Thanks
chemistry between them, yet he is sooo slow about his daughter-same eyes and age of their break-up. Looking forward to more of this funny series.
this guy has some serious control issues.
And I'm sure he can't be so ignorant as to not know Star is his?
that this little girl is his? Ugh!!! Also the dialogue are quite poor, and it took him what an hour to get invited back at he rplace? Really?
Like is he intentionally ignoring the fact that star is his or is he like just that clueless
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