All Comments on 'Bonds Unbroken Ch. 02'

I really like this story and wouldn't mind a bit if the chapters were longer ;) Looking forward to Chapter 3!

You've got me interested. I'll be looking for the next chapter. I do wish that the chapters were a bit longer. Only a few edit mistakes, but overall pretty good writing.

Thanks those who are reading, favoriting, and commenting! Sorry about any editing mistakes in the story. I try to catch them as best I can. Just a heads up, Ch. 3 has been submitted-a little longer with some action and new characters. I hope you enjoy!

I hope Mishtar is successful.

I can't wait to find out who Velaku's mate is!

for posting the chapters quickly.

such a lot going on. am loving it ;0)