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Bonds Unbroken Ch. 02

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by Anonymous

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by npiccini10/28/11

I really like this story and wouldn't mind a bit if the chapters were longer ;) Looking forward to Chapter 3!

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by Anonymous10/28/11

Good

You've got me interested. I'll be looking for the next chapter. I do wish that the chapters were a bit longer. Only a few edit mistakes, but overall pretty good writing.

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by Cia8110/29/11

New chapter coming soon!

Thanks those who are reading, favoriting, and commenting! Sorry about any editing mistakes in the story. I try to catch them as best I can. Just a heads up, Ch. 3 has been submitted-a little longer with some action and new characters. I hope you enjoy!

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by fukmi_allnite10/29/11

I hope Mishtar is successful.

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by Anonymous10/30/11

I can't wait to find out who Velaku's mate is!

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by frosty_hore810/30/11

thank you...

for posting the chapters quickly.

such a lot going on. am loving it ;0)

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