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Sweet Torment

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by Anonymous

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by LittleVixen6910/28/11

GREAT!!!

"Brings me to the edge"

Love it.....

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by deliciouspleaser10/29/11

love it

beautifully written. love the composition and the way you played with the words. good job keep it up.

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by Image1311/02/11

A pleasure

Very nice poem. The build up was what moved me

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by wahoo3311/03/11

Thanks for sharing.

Great poem, reminds me of a fantasy I have long thought about. Thanks for sharing it with us!

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by Anonymous11/03/11

on the edge of 4 into 5

knowing for a fact this is the fist poem the woman has written in forty years, coupled with the nice near-rhyme of the last verses of each "stanza", a "4" for having attempted a poem at all after so many years eased overly easily into a "5" for the near-rhymes. unless this is "beginner's luck", the author shows potential.

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by kneedeep9811/04/11

Great

The poem describes seduction at it's finest.

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by Sun Tan Guy12/25/11

Very sweet and erotic

Oh I would make you wait and wait. and beg for more... over and over to.. very nice.. like it too.. the sub side of you is very intrigueing.. love a switch though..
STG

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by Jaden_cyber01/22/12

merging

tongue drawing circles,
triggering waves of sensation to your core.
Till two bodies melts.

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by paulthewetcd02/21/12

This poem...

...is just the beginning!

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by PaulBlart03/19/12

I long to tease and be teased. To push and to be pushed to the point where you must have more. Driven by desire alone.

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by western_fireman03/23/12

Tease

Mistress, Would I be allowed to tease you?

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by kevin123404/17/12

sub love

your work is amazing

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by dblofive06/10/12

Not so sure

While I do like the visual of lips on your legs, I don't know if I liked this. It just seemed to end to abruptly for me. But that's just my preference.

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by Anonymous06/23/12

Thank you

Teasing me... brings me to the edge......

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by Paul2503/03/13

You

I'd love to be able to provide this kind of pleasure to you. That's part of who I am, what I feel.

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