by dreamykitten2
beautifully written. love the composition and the way you played with the words. good job keep it up.
Great poem, reminds me of a fantasy I have long thought about. Thanks for sharing it with us!
knowing for a fact this is the fist poem the woman has written in forty years, coupled with the nice near-rhyme of the last verses of each "stanza", a "4" for having attempted a poem at all after so many years eased overly easily into a "5" for the near-rhymes. unless this is "beginner's luck", the author shows potential.
Oh I would make you wait and wait. and beg for more... over and over to.. very nice.. like it too.. the sub side of you is very intrigueing.. love a switch though..
STG
tongue drawing circles,
triggering waves of sensation to your core.
Till two bodies melts.
I long to tease and be teased. To push and to be pushed to the point where you must have more. Driven by desire alone.
While I do like the visual of lips on your legs, I don't know if I liked this. It just seemed to end to abruptly for me. But that's just my preference.
I'd love to be able to provide this kind of pleasure to you. That's part of who I am, what I feel.
Very expressive, love the build up, the anticipation. Nicely done!