Sweet Torment

GREAT!!!

"Brings me to the edge"

Love it.....

love it

beautifully written. love the composition and the way you played with the words. good job keep it up.

A pleasure

Very nice poem. The build up was what moved me

Thanks for sharing.

Great poem, reminds me of a fantasy I have long thought about. Thanks for sharing it with us!

on the edge of 4 into 5

knowing for a fact this is the fist poem the woman has written in forty years, coupled with the nice near-rhyme of the last verses of each "stanza", a "4" for having attempted a poem at all after so many years eased overly easily into a "5" for the near-rhymes. unless this is "beginner's luck", the author shows potential.

Great

The poem describes seduction at it's finest.

Very sweet and erotic

Oh I would make you wait and wait. and beg for more... over and over to.. very nice.. like it too.. the sub side of you is very intrigueing.. love a switch though..
STG

merging

tongue drawing circles,
triggering waves of sensation to your core.
Till two bodies melts.

This poem...

...is just the beginning!

I long to tease and be teased. To push and to be pushed to the point where you must have more. Driven by desire alone.

Tease

Mistress, Would I be allowed to tease you?

sub love

your work is amazing

Not so sure

While I do like the visual of lips on your legs, I don't know if I liked this. It just seemed to end to abruptly for me. But that's just my preference.

Thank you

Teasing me... brings me to the edge......

You

I'd love to be able to provide this kind of pleasure to you. That's part of who I am, what I feel.