All Comments on 'Whipping Girl'

Ass Sex is a BIG turn off. Unless your gay.....

I believe Anon means "you're" but regardless, definitely not a turn off. Good work.

Please ignore the Anon venting about his/her personal hang-ups.

I love the economy of words you used to efficiently convey their complementary needs (his to take; hers to give).

This story is white hot. Well done!

please ignore the anon who gave you a 5 i'm sure he is retarded.

Just a delicious petite dish of femininity being a Loving Wife for hubby. Nasty and good writing, thanks...Mancelt.

But it was very erotic. Although I question that conditioning someone to desire pain or to believe that her place is the personal whiping post for her husband/master.

If she "learned" to accept her place, then it was the result of brutality and not love that brought her to that place and it wouldn't matter if she wanted ti or not, she would "accept" it because that is what HE wanted.

in BDSM Cat.

thanks for the great story... i personally loved the intensity and buildup... the visual. well done thank you...

Oh never mind. Clear Conscience is my fav story of your work. I will introduce you to any one of the exes just please never date my little sister .

or a flogging. True love is given and taken. Not shared, TK U MLJ LV NV

I 5ed it.

i.wonder what score loving femdom scene play would get?

Any man that feels the need to beat a woman belongs in prison or 6 feet under. There was nothing sexy or erotic about this garbage. Ugly story of abuse.

1 star

Big man. Beating a woman is certainly a manly pursuit.