by wantsomefun1951
Loved it so glad you made the second chapter. Bring on her friends.
I hope the author stops the dialog from going back and forth from an innocent girl to an experienced woman. It seriously distracts from the story.
These two parts have been very interesting reads. Please tell us more. SOON!!
keep writing and go with how you feel the story should progress. you are a very good story teller.
You write extremely well, and you're an excellent story teller. Also great on the sexuality, and I imagine the father's inner dialogue is true to life. (Fortunately, I don't know.)
One thing worries me: are the two friends who come for the slumber party going to have sex with the father and daughter? I really hope not. It's so much more interesting to have just the two of them fucking. It would be OK if the 3 girls messed around, but without good ol' Dad stirring things up with his pecker.
Very well written. Can't wait for more!
wow so fucking hot ! thanks
plzzz more, one of my top5 fav dad/daug stories
5/5
I enjoyed both stories very much
Please do continue the story line!
Every bit as good as the last one, but the old slumber party ploy has me worried that this innocent-but-erotic storyline is going the way of an orgy or some other cheapening of their relationship. That would be a shame.
And more to come!! But please no mass orgies--a threesome perhaps but the father/daughter sex is too well done to abandon.
Great approach to the possible situation of Father daughter incest. Haven't read many of the type, but I like your approach better than any others I have read, although Dad does seem to lack self control. Thanks, looking forward to the next chapter, possibly during the sleepover, the way you worked that in just before end of chapter 2 definitely leads you audience to expect it.
Beautiful, warm, romantic, very realistic language. Very natural progression of events.
Didn't comment on the first chapter but I'm loving your story!!!! On to chapter 3!!!!!
Beautiful, romantic, sexy but innocent at the same time, a time of new sensations for both.
Sorry the first chapter to this story was my favorite why did you take it down?
http://www.lushstories.com/wantsomefun
Format is bullshit, but its better than nothing
Went looking and found - http://www.sexstories.com/profile884598/wantsomefun
Looks like the chapters are broken up differently there. One and part of Two there seem to happen before Two here.
Haven't read the story yet, kind of have coming in in the middle. Is Part 1 posted anywhere?
Iwish my daughter was like this one . Always fantasized about laying beside her with me cock buried inside
This is a great read and so's is number 3. My youngest daughter loved reading them as well and got her so stirred up she came to me in the shower one evening and asked to to asked me if I would do her just like no2 . I was so shocked and refused but she stripped off and got in the shower with me. Took my hand and ran over her boobs then between her thighs parting her sweet lips and pushing my fingers inside. Couldn't resist the thought of servicing her while mother was away after what she had done. One thing lead to another now we are sexual partners regularly getting naughty
What man wouldn’t like to be seduced by a nympho daughter like his? Is pregnancy coming up?
... to read Part 1 before any of following chapters. Checked both places listed by other commentors, but no go.
https://web.archive.org/web/20120102032459/http://www.literotica.com:80/s/dad-i-have-a-question