All Comments on 'Go Screw Yourself'

by DexSinis

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MizTMizTover 12 years ago
Congrats

on your first story. I think you did a good job w/it. Although there were a few small mistakes the quality of the story out weighs them. So nice job.

I wish you the best of luck w/your writing, and hope to read more from you in the future.

redskyesredskyesover 12 years ago
Nicely done!

Very fun read. I look forward to more of your work!

B59001B59001over 12 years ago
Brilliant Story

The theory of parallel universes is a fantastic back drop to the story.A great read.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Awesome

The ending was exceptional, if I do say so myself.

DexSinisDexSinisover 12 years agoAuthor

For reference, the Anonymous posting about the ending was not actually me. :P

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Cute

I liked this story, where can I find this store and buy my own Doorway?

Though the semi-mind reading was a bit confusing. :/

FallenAlfarFallenAlfaralmost 12 years ago
Two of you at the same time?

Maybe next time you can write a story about a man cloning himself as a woman and transferring his memories into her or something, then they could f**k. That's my fantasy anyway. :]

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Entertaining! :D

Any chance of expanding on that story?

SPEN STERLINGSPEN STERLINGalmost 12 years ago
cool

What a great concept, the idea of having sex with your parallel universe self. I actually liked the idea of some mind reading going on too, as if they knew what the other would want to do. Like masturbating with a real life toy!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
You can potentially create your own doorway

see Quantum Entangled Systems. I found it in a forum and linked it.

Search: QESdunn pbworks

Its a proposed pathway for building alternate universes

maybe the story writing can use the concepts some how

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

Good lord, I hope they used birth control. Imagine the genetic risk!

muskyboymuskyboyalmost 4 years ago

Great story premise

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