All Comments on 'Batman: Harem 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
very good.

good first time on a story hope there is going to be more chapters with other female villans.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Awesome

Awesome keep going plz

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Good days to come.

Loving it, keep it up :D

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 12 years ago
Bravo, Bravo, well done

I'm hoping this goes on a long time.

Imagine, all the female crims he could "rehabilitate". OMG.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Us there a second yet

This story was riviting I loved it well done

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Lol'd unintentionally at this.

I know this probably isn't what you intended, but I laughed way too many times during this to even think about fapping. one, Coke-can thick?! good god, that's like the thickness of a toddler's leg! two, batman is right in the middle of raping Harley Quinn into being a good guy (which is also #3 for me) when he thinks about turning her into a crime fighter. I know you didn't intend it, but that made me laugh so much. you've got one of the hottest pieces of ass in gotham at your erotic mercy... and your first thought is 'I wonder if she can fight crime?' Only you, Batman. Only you. Great work, man.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Great job

You did a great job capturing the voices from the 90's cartoon. I've come back to this story several times. Kudos

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Badly written.

POS.

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