All Comments on 'Camping with SIL'

whats up with the f*** totally ruined the story

When you're writing porn you might want to leave that part out.

Thank you for including the guilt and recriminations. Makes the story more believable and is definitely appropriate.

Is this just a story? Or did this really happen? I've had plenty of fantasy's about my hot sister-in-law.

I just would like to understand why you wrote it. The story shows you as an opportunist with little actual feeling for your SIL. The story is well written as far as it goes.

You censor yourself with, "the fantasy of f***ing her" but you talk about wet pussy and two unmarried people committing adultery? Grow a pair!!

This needs an erotic follow-up!

I have a silk much like yours and would love to experience what you did.

Lucky you.

Damn!!! My SIL turns me on just like that, I can only imagine the feeling of it actually happening!!!

so similar to mine!

I'm kinda digging the realism of the ending. Hot, but awkward and weird after.

Hope you have a follow up story.

OK, this must be your wife's sister, that's why she's p

issed. You have got to finish this with two or three more chapters. I see a three way here too. Now, there's a lot of missing words and some grammar problems, so you have got to get help editing your work. You are s good writer, you just need a cleanup hitter. Keep writing.

XYZ

I'm assuming this SiL is your wife's sister, not your brother's ex. Only because she got pissed at you for cheating on your wife after she enjoyed several orgasms. Since you used your tongue as well as your cock, I'm betting she'll be back. Though it may take a while, she is thinking about what you did and wanting more. Remember, women accuse us of thinking with the little brain in our cocks, their little pussies have brains too, and sometimes that does the thinking for them to. You might have to show a little interest, but it might just pay you back 10 fold. Keep writing.

XYZ

I must say a hot story and once they shared the same mattress, inevitable. However, what a hypocrite she turned out to be.

Good story. The ending could have been different. She could have told him that she enjoyed it but did not think it could happen again. And as they parted she could have walked away smiling at him.

Ending sucked...3 Stars.