by daughterof1917
Excellent story, though I think it started out a bit off. Seems a bit scattered without any backstory on Nadia or how this episode came about. But, that doesn't detract from the overall. Once you're in, you're in!
I'm hoping that you do a second, third and fourth installment with a continuance of the debauchery.
It's a year later and tbis is still one of my favorites. Please write more,
See where the 4 characters end up after this and how Nadia got her powers
YOU NEED to continue the journey. Write about what happened next, the siblings love affair continues, how they couldn't stop what was happening to them no matter what they did... Lot's more to create.