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All Comments on 'Summer Thunder'

by jackalpup

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
HOT..TER?

.....a few paragraphs......not bad!!

jlasvegasjlasvegasalmost 19 years ago
picnic

great tale.makes me want to be there.had me hard from the begining. excelent way with words

oldwayneoldwayneover 16 years ago
Really Good

This little tale was really good, but I think you could develop it into so much more! How about a sequel????

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Just after a paragraph they started kissing.. not my kind of stff

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