All Comments on 'Buzz-Crackle'

good story, but not a gay one.

I submitted it as Erotic Couplings, I'm not sure why it got changed lol.

Thanks for the comment! This is my first story for literotica!

Beautifully written and very sexy. You need to fix the category though; it's certainly not a gay male story.

I know the author. She wrote it as Erotic Couplings, and it got moved here for some reason. Regardless, I have to say well done! I can't wait to read more of your work!

story. Too bad Lit moved it here, but hey, wouldn't have found it if that hadn't happened, LOL!

Not only was it not EROTIC coupling as written and submitted so we're told by the author , but was lusted as ooops Listed as

Submitted by BluebirdDreams ***(LOVING Wives)***

But wait, there's more. . . the subheading on the 'front Page' was . . .

"GAY MALE Male Buzz-Crackle "

Erotic, Gay-Male Loving Wives. Literotica has a tough audience.

Confusedly

Kilroy.

Very sexy story. Not realistic in the theory of what sane swingers would do, but otherwise a sexy fantasy! Keep writing, I will watch for more stories from you.

Very well written and very erotic. Loved it!

of what a newbie might think sex was about, TK U MLJ LV NV

That there is a lot more guys ready to fuck her, and she is going to be fucked all night.

Thanks for the read.

i didn't know what to expect, but i have to say this was such a wonderful read, so descriptive, it pulls you in and makes you wish you were in the story.

Wow... you really made this story come alive, and then some. To say I enjoyed is an understatement, but I enjoyed the back and forth as she tried to take control, as well as the naughty naughty narrative. I suspect I'll be returning to read this again and again. You've got a sexy sexy mind :)

very nice - does find the sweet spots between my thighs :D

I think every woman at some point fantasizes about this very thing!

Is it wrong that I need a change of clothes now?

i havent read anything this exciting in a long time. please continue

to agree to dis-agree and say No Thanks. TK U MLJ LV NV

Hot and heavy tale. I hope the husband had a good time also.

I wonder who came next the husband or AN other she could be pleasured all night, and be well and truly fucked.

At least post this garbage in the right category.

Where was the idiot husband all this time? Did she ever find out who the stranger was? and why did the husband allow a stranger to enter a room where his wife was bound? If the wife didn't know the man? did the husband know him? Or was the husband so desperate for their friends ass that he didn't care about his wife? so many questions.The whole story did not even make sense. Hope this questions help with any other venture into writing you have in mind. Don't ever assume that the reader will figure anything out for you. you will lose readers doing that. No matter how good you think you are. To be honest, I skipped through a lot of paragraphs to get to the end, and that is what we do with a lot of stories like this.