All Comments on 'Bukket Ch. 01'

by PoisonedEve

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
was this story

created by a programm ?

half the story the same ping pong phrases back and forth

PoisonedEvePoisonedEveover 12 years agoAuthor

:-)

I hope you like ping pong, because this one does not end with this.

Beware of more chapters!! ;-)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Intriguing title

Not bad, warming up nicely.

2275jr2275jrover 12 years ago
seeing you on your knees with you face cover in in jizz.

love this your first story .bukket ch one. i can see this being a real turn on. this being the first one of this kind of story i have read. love both the story and the awesome writing of it .cant wait to read more of your very erotic stories.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Different, but refreshing.

I have never read a fetish story before. Not sure what drew me to yours. It is well written and seemingly realistic, meaning that so far it is believable. I guess I have to read the 2nd installment.

Your story is better than the others I've read at Lit. Good job!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Brilliant

This sexy, sustained, interesting and believable. I can't wait to read the rest-

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