by PoisonedEve
created by a programm ?
half the story the same ping pong phrases back and forth
:-)
I hope you like ping pong, because this one does not end with this.
Beware of more chapters!! ;-)
love this your first story .bukket ch one. i can see this being a real turn on. this being the first one of this kind of story i have read. love both the story and the awesome writing of it .cant wait to read more of your very erotic stories.
I have never read a fetish story before. Not sure what drew me to yours. It is well written and seemingly realistic, meaning that so far it is believable. I guess I have to read the 2nd installment.
Your story is better than the others I've read at Lit. Good job!
This sexy, sustained, interesting and believable. I can't wait to read the rest-