by Loveslust
I like the story it's really interesting.
Give it an overall 5 from the beginning.
I have really enjoyed reading these stories, I would love to see this continue. Keep up the good work.
PLEASE keep going! I keep checking back to see if there has been a new chapter updated. It's driving me insane...
pleasssssseeeeeeeee keep writing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I really like this story , and i hate to see it incomplete. so continue writing this story and finish it.
I'll be honest: Get some proofreading done, and you could probably get this published. Well done.