All Comments on 'A Sibling Rivalry'

That was great. Easily the best story I've read in a long time!

He he - I don't think that this matter will ever be settled, but I suspect they'll both have lot of fun "discussing" it.

next day?

That was one of the best story's I've read in a while and you made me laugh! Great one babe <3

I guess I wanted him to get his tongue into her naked pussy, and suck on her clit, to where they both realize that they really want to be lovers.

Still a good story and very nicely done.

Thanks for the read.

I found this an excellent start to a possible series. I like how it wasn't very explicit and kind of soft core. I seriously think you should consider continuing this story for at least a couple more chapters if not more.

I loved this story. I hope you add to this. I want to see there relationship go further.

I loved how there wasn't actual sex. I think the whole "flirting" during wrestling was sexy as hell! :)

Bring back memories of me and my sister thanks

I loved the way u developed the plot and rated it a 5, because of the punch line, just brilliant!

Nothing like titilization, hmmm?

Well organized and a very good sense of the tension between the siblings. I especially like your final ending or I should say sentence - a great pun. Well thought out.

Great story I loved the way this story was told. well written

amazing!! just fantastic!!

One of the best stories I've read so far I hope there is more to come! 5 stars!!!

"They were both too far gone now to think about how naughty this was."

I love the way this builds. These are just two normal, though red blooded, kids horsing around, and their grappling leads to something naughtier than they probably would have imagined, although not so naughty that they will be irretrievably marked. They remain normal, healthy, believable kids, and they've gained a deeper, more caring sense of each other.

You are very good with teasing aspect of fore play.

I really enjoy reading your stories.

I could anticipate where the story was going and when it got there, it was very good!

there was not a chapter 2

JUST KIDS FIGHTING, A WASTE OF TIME.

MY COMMENT ::: START OVER, TRY AGAIN.

3 out of 5 stars

Brings back memories of wrestling with my teenage sister. No sex. Just grinding.