by wantsomefun1951
Too funny when you wrote, "I was trying to think of places without extradition agreements when I heard Jamie call out, 'Dad, are you awake?'"
Great story. Really very well told.
I really like the story and how close jamie and the father is. I too laughed at the extradition line.
While I usually am not to much into father daughter stories these have been quite good with enough humor and sex to make them really enjoyable. The relationship between father and daughter seems rite on. Throw in the other young girl and it makes for a great reading experience.
one of the better ones of this kind of story. I have often wonder if this has ever happened in real life---
A hot, legal teen who wants him; this won't be ending any time soon.
So wet now. I need a big, hard, fat juicy cock rammed up me. I need to ride one so badly
Fuck that's hot. I'm lookingfor a big fat cock to fuck..you have any ideas??
Just outstanding writing. I couldn't help laughing at some of the comments though. Does it happen in real life? Probably more often than people think!
I can't decide if I hate the introduction of her best friend into their relationship, or if I like it. I think I don't like it, but I'll reserve my opinion until the next installment to see how things progress. BUT, that aside your writing is great. I have been enjoying it - in a few different ways! =)
My body has been reacting to this story through all three chapters. It is fantastic, innocent sounding, and hotter than my fireplace this cold December day! I can't wait for the next chapter!
you NEED TO CONTINUE THIS STORY/ I cant wait to read about the sleep over.
Its come along and told so well up to now/ ty and keep it going
Please continue.....this was so hott, I want to read more.
Please, please continue :) Normally I like father/daughter stories where they make a couple for life with noone else with them, but since Jamie's been talking about how she might find another man some day I kind of started thinking of Kiersten being his girlfriend instead, while daughter is just in for the ride until she finds someone she wants for herself. Either way I hope it will continue as it has, I love romance... :) Could be a big mistake if the sleepover turns into an orgy. I could guess already that Jamie is curious about girl/girl sex from her comments earlier. :)
I can't wait to see how Daddy Bill answers Kiersten's questions. I hope Melody will have some questions of her own at the long-awaited graduation weekend sleepover. And although the focus is (and should be) on Daddy Bill & the girls, I wouldn't mind seeing the girls have a few "questions" for each other. After all, there's only so much one man can do! LOL
This series is so great. You do an amazing job of showing the father's concerns for both his daughter and her friend, he's not just a horny old man trying to get his kicks. He has genuine worries that they will regret it. Still I love though that his daughter can sway him rather easily. I wanted to favorite all 3 chapters but I saw a thing that said I can only have so many fav's. So I will add this as a favorite, but please know I love all 3!
This is by far the best story series on this website. I find myself wishing i was Daddy Bill. I just hope this series never ends.
Each chapter is as good as the one before! Beautiful writing style, so realistic and natural, soft and erotically romantic.
My "friend" who commented here, and on a bunch of my other stuff, on October 15, 2012, is apparently not a fan.
It wouldn't surprise me if I knew who he was -- another writer who is nice enough to me when we're both logged-in on the other website where we submit stories, but who stabs his fellow writers in the back when he can. He's one of those guys who takes himself WAY too seriously.
Buddy -- we're writing porn and submitting it without payment to an internet site, using FAKE names. This is a hobby, a way to have fun, to express ourselves, and to entertain, isn't it?
Thanks for the "1" rating. I wish you had actually read the damn thing.
I've been happily reading the first three chapters and just wanted to drop a line. Really good sex scenes, nice descriptions, very hot. I like the way you've emphasized the love in the relationship, which is really what makes this type of story work. Great stuff!
Thanks for the great stories. I appreciate reading material from authors with the ability to project their feelings and imagination in such a way that it causes others to feel the emotional release they seek. Pls continue writing. I'm a 77 yr old fan now!
...of wantsomefun's great, great stories.
Although this one may be greater than the other great ones.
Paul in Oklahoma