All Comments on 'Dad, I Have a Question Ch. 03'

by wantsomefun1951

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RavenOnCaRavenOnCaover 12 years ago
OMG

OMG you can't stop there.... next installment please :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Outstanding!

"5+

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Too funny when you wrote, "I was trying to think of places without extradition agreements when I heard Jamie call out, 'Dad, are you awake?'"

Great story. Really very well told.

Scurvydog44035Scurvydog44035over 12 years ago
Love the humor

I really like the story and how close jamie and the father is. I too laughed at the extradition line.

petecopetecoover 12 years ago

While I usually am not to much into father daughter stories these have been quite good with enough humor and sex to make them really enjoyable. The relationship between father and daughter seems rite on. Throw in the other young girl and it makes for a great reading experience.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
oh boy----

one of the better ones of this kind of story. I have often wonder if this has ever happened in real life---

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Between the humor and the hot sex this a continual 5 Star series.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Jamie is going to have a new mom.

A hot, legal teen who wants him; this won't be ending any time soon.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
mmmmmm

So wet now. I need a big, hard, fat juicy cock rammed up me. I need to ride one so badly

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm!

Keep this story line cumming!!

justme601000justme601000over 12 years ago
We want MORE Questions!

Bring it on!!!!!!!!

LuciousLicksGirlLuciousLicksGirlover 12 years ago

Fuck that's hot. I'm lookingfor a big fat cock to fuck..you have any ideas??

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
heck yes

next chapter please come on we r waitin here

rumynayborrumynayborover 12 years ago
author of the year

Just outstanding writing. I couldn't help laughing at some of the comments though. Does it happen in real life? Probably more often than people think!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
how long?

How much longer till part 4!?! i cant wait need it nowww.

hourihouriover 12 years ago
Torn

I can't decide if I hate the introduction of her best friend into their relationship, or if I like it. I think I don't like it, but I'll reserve my opinion until the next installment to see how things progress. BUT, that aside your writing is great. I have been enjoying it - in a few different ways! =)

Morlan502Morlan502over 12 years ago
More Please

My body has been reacting to this story through all three chapters. It is fantastic, innocent sounding, and hotter than my fireplace this cold December day! I can't wait for the next chapter!

billyjim55billyjim55over 12 years ago
PLEASE CONTINUE

you NEED TO CONTINUE THIS STORY/ I cant wait to read about the sleep over.

Its come along and told so well up to now/ ty and keep it going

UnmatchedUnicorn1985UnmatchedUnicorn1985over 12 years ago
OH MY GOD!!!

Please continue.....this was so hott, I want to read more.

MattAkerMattAkerover 12 years ago
Love the story so far, hope it will continue soon :)

Please, please continue :) Normally I like father/daughter stories where they make a couple for life with noone else with them, but since Jamie's been talking about how she might find another man some day I kind of started thinking of Kiersten being his girlfriend instead, while daughter is just in for the ride until she finds someone she wants for herself. Either way I hope it will continue as it has, I love romance... :) Could be a big mistake if the sleepover turns into an orgy. I could guess already that Jamie is curious about girl/girl sex from her comments earlier. :)

Dark_StormDark_Stormover 12 years ago
And the answer is...

I can't wait to see how Daddy Bill answers Kiersten's questions. I hope Melody will have some questions of her own at the long-awaited graduation weekend sleepover. And although the focus is (and should be) on Daddy Bill & the girls, I wouldn't mind seeing the girls have a few "questions" for each other. After all, there's only so much one man can do! LOL

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
PLEASE!!!!!!!

Please continue this story!!!!!! It's so amazing!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
MORE!!!

One of the best. Thank you for writing it!

Hot2Trot_NowHot2Trot_Nowabout 12 years ago
Great Job!

This series is so great. You do an amazing job of showing the father's concerns for both his daughter and her friend, he's not just a horny old man trying to get his kicks. He has genuine worries that they will regret it. Still I love though that his daughter can sway him rather easily. I wanted to favorite all 3 chapters but I saw a thing that said I can only have so many fav's. So I will add this as a favorite, but please know I love all 3!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Best of the Best

This is by far the best story series on this website. I find myself wishing i was Daddy Bill. I just hope this series never ends.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Wonderful!!!

Each chapter is as good as the one before! Beautiful writing style, so realistic and natural, soft and erotically romantic.

wantsomefun1951wantsomefun1951over 11 years agoAuthor
Troll alert.

My "friend" who commented here, and on a bunch of my other stuff, on October 15, 2012, is apparently not a fan.

It wouldn't surprise me if I knew who he was -- another writer who is nice enough to me when we're both logged-in on the other website where we submit stories, but who stabs his fellow writers in the back when he can. He's one of those guys who takes himself WAY too seriously.

Buddy -- we're writing porn and submitting it without payment to an internet site, using FAKE names. This is a hobby, a way to have fun, to express ourselves, and to entertain, isn't it?

Thanks for the "1" rating. I wish you had actually read the damn thing.

twistedjoe37twistedjoe37almost 11 years ago
Great series

I've been happily reading the first three chapters and just wanted to drop a line. Really good sex scenes, nice descriptions, very hot. I like the way you've emphasized the love in the relationship, which is really what makes this type of story work. Great stuff!

MrBill36MrBill36over 10 years ago
Great story line

Thanks for the great stories. I appreciate reading material from authors with the ability to project their feelings and imagination in such a way that it causes others to feel the emotional release they seek. Pls continue writing. I'm a 77 yr old fan now!

charliebillcharliebillover 6 years ago
More please

What a great deal to fuck these 2 cute virgins!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
JUST ANOTHER

...of wantsomefun's great, great stories.

Although this one may be greater than the other great ones.

Paul in Oklahoma

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Slut Jamie should just pimp out her father

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

I love your series looking forward to the next part thanks 5stars gpa

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