All Comments on 'Lonely Family Fucks'

Your writing is atrocious.

I got off to this!!! Great story!

This is one of the breast stories ive ever read

I liked it but a fair warning...some of my stories got lower ratings because of too many caps, and you have similar problems.

Crap stories are not a turn-on for me. Or most folks.

you definitely need an editor. I don't mind the caps, but seriously the bad grammar is a turn-off. Although, I must say, your story is so fucking hot.

Ok i love this story but these comments about grammer and shit if your paying that much attentin to that your missing the hole point if the storry

I can see your point. Reading your comment with the poor grammar and spelling says it all. Look, minor mistakes can be overlooked but really poor grammar and bad spelling makes for difficult reading. There are free editors on this site that could remedy that problem. Use them.

That was soooo hot

I want to hear more, this made me so wet!

I came 4 times.

Fantastic, loved it