My Fantasy (Lesbian)

good start

just go with the flow and let your story develop as it will.....

Don't stop now.

Don't stop now. You have a great beginning. Let you imagination flow. Now that you've smelled the essence of her womanhood, do what your fantasy tells you to do. Please continue

yes! PLEASE continue! love it so far...

please write more, I was already getting wet!

Omg!!!! Please keep it coming....

Good Start

There are a few small grammatical issues with your story, but the lead up is very good and was just starting to get good. It's not nice to leave your audience hanging like that, but on the other hand, it gets them to read your follow up, so bring it. We will be looking forward to it!

great story

looking forward to part 2 hopefully

just the thought of you with a pussy in front of your face wow

great start to this very erotic hot horny story. getting hotter as the story went on.
can't wait to read the next part if this first part is any thing to go by . great start to this your first story. love the writing who said you can't write .

You are off to a great start!

Great first effort, reminds me of some video from Japan where girls on the subway were groping other girls, very hot, keep up the good work.

teaser

you need to continue that story it is very nice

More, please MORE!

A very enticing story! Please continue.... :)

Brilliant

Brilliant writing and story line. I'm so glad you continued. This one so got me going. :-)

this story has me fantasizing too!!!

my favorite lesbian story EVER!!!!!!!!!! i just LOVE that guy masturbating while watching. i fantasize i'm him. and with that ending, where you reward him, sooooo HOT!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i keep on cumming to this story!!!!!!!!!!