All Comments on 'Wolf's Pet Ch. 03'

and getting hotter!

Cannot wait to see what happens withthe couple. update soon please.

These one page updates are killing me! Can't wait for the next chapter. :)

About Karen and Cole and less about Gary, just the way I like it. Of course w/o Gary there wouldn't be much of a story here. Is Gary part of a new group trying to move into the territory or is he just trying to sway Karen into being with him? Cole on the other hand seems to have Gary's number. Having him trailed 24/7 along w/watching the public lands. And the Hottie still has time to kiss the girl. And he hasn't stopped kissing yet! hehe-he

I am enjoying this story and will be watching for the next chapter.

Wow... Chemical romance.... Sweet

a bit short but I like how you introduced them through Brett. I just wish you had let us in on some of the convo between them so that the reader could experience some of the bonding they did. It's good to hear they talked for hours and got to know each other but it would have been better to be along for the ride so the reader felt the chemistry too (the physical chemistry came through fine on its own ;) I hope you can help develop the characters and their relationship by letting us in on their time together. Right now, we don't really know much about her beyond her living situation and job. It's the same with him. Keep writing!

Will be looking for further updates of this story. Good job so far keep it up

i just found this story today, i'm soooo glad i did! hope to read more real soon!

Mature... Or cougar. I'm sry but u keep mentioning the age difference and it makes it hard for me to read past. I'm only 20 so a guy 15 yrs younger? 5. I can pretend up to 30 but even at 30 he'd be 15 so 30s not working for me. It's just hard for me to try to get into this char when she keeps saying she's at least 35+.

is 200+ years, weres just age very slowly, karen just sees him younger...

Your yarn, in my humble opinion, is primal passion at its best! I am excited about reading the balance of the sequels.

No one has mentioned her age bud. What a derp.

I'm only 3 parts in with this series, but I have questions about lycan mythology in general, I'm assuming every writer follows certain guidelines but want to know why in otherwise well written lycan mythology do humans never struggle with the initial mate-at-first-sight dynamic? As this is the first one I've read where the human may be involved with somebody else. I assumed in the natural world if a wolf bitch was so attractive that she was giving off a "mate-able" scent, a wolf would be beating off all comers to get into his or her mate's knickers - and the human he or she would be weighing up the options rather than simply subservient to lycan culture?

Puppy love? In a lycan story? I damn near fell off the couch snickering to death. One of my dogs gave me an odd look I was snickering so hard.

I'm going to be shot down in flames, but so far, I think this story would have worked better without any obvious sexual references. (Every time I see the word "pussy", it jars – it's like it was written to tell a story about weres, then sex was added so it could be posted on Lit.)

Read the rest of the story ass hole. It gets better. Way better