All Comments on 'Best Present Ever: Bitch Sister'

I vote for Best Present Ever: Sister's Friends

Great story as normal

Next please- Best Present Ever: Sister's Friends

Sisters friends definitely

next please best friends

What a combo, incest and reluctance!

Always enjoy reading your stories and the next three in this series will be very interesting reads...... looking forward to reading all three of them.

Next sets: friends, neighbor, mom, group - excellent read!

Friends, then Milf finally mom

MILF next plse

Loved the stockings/garter aspects they helped me too. Nice one darlin'

Looking forward to the next one

xx

Friends then milf

MILF, definitely!

Sister's friends.

I would definitely read all three!

Friend that will be sexy

I really liked this story. I hope we get to see Matthew get Sandra's friends next. I look forward to it. Just don't take TOO long.

The logical progression is friends, neighbor and mom. If the stories continue to be written this good I will read them regardless of who gets done next.

milf, friends then mom than maybe a full blown fuckfest with everyone

I think that you need a good master yourself. That would be your best present ever. On the whole not bad at all you get a 5 from me (slut)

Bets Present Ever: Sister's Friends

Would enjoy all 3 tales ,come ahead with them

there is no way this would ever happen in any stretch of the imagination. he would never go back if he had to put up with a bitch like her keep it atleast somewhat realistic or put it in the fantasy area. a guy like that would have found a job so he could have a reason to stay at college and skip the holidays and summer typical trash for this site we need better writers.

This was a very hot story and I think you should write more. I think the other three stories you listed should be your next pieces of work. Good job n keep the stroke stories coming!

As usual another great story, I think a MILF story would be great for the next one.

Excellent bit of writing and just long enough to get the reader interested in more.

That was so hot. I can't wait to read all three. My pussy is quivering in suspense.

sis's friends

milf neighbor

mom(she can be the new years conquest)

really good story though

Logically, sister's friends would be next as they plan how to get the MILF neighbor, who then helps in seducing Mom on New Year's Eve :-D I don't suppose the neighbor is a teacher, is she???? <wink> LOVED IT!!!!

--J

It has to be MOM.

great story, but unless he is going to sell the pictures for money, they would be for posterity - not prosperity. Loved it though. Please write more!

This should be a series much more to cum I hope!

Also enjoyed the humour of the 23rd film night!

I would love to read this next Best Present Ever: Mom, and that was a great story of the bitchy sister.

In fact, here is the edited version I sent to the author:"“Ta-ta-ta, my baby sister,” I teased, snapping off a few more pictures, including a couple of close-ups of her cum-coated face. “You do remember who is in charge, don’t you? These are just for posterity. Although they may also come in handy if you decide to not be the obedient little slut I expect you to be.”

Apparently the author disagreed with my edit. Would hardly have been the first time. Perhaps the author thought "prosperity" opened the door to future blackmail. Que sais-je?

As for the anonymous commentator who said that this could never happen in RL, how does s/he know? How much would s/he have bet in September that Joe Paterno would not be fired by Penn State before season's end? Had someone written a story in June 2010 about Penn State's football program being a center of child molestation, they would have been laughed to hell and back. Truth is invariably stranger than fiction.

The next chapter should have BOTH Mom and the neightbor together and getting caught by Matthew and to protect their reputations, both become dominated by him.

Great story need to do all three, any order

My sister came to my bed and let me finger her when she was 23 and I was 19. Eight years later, when she was in the middle of a messy divorce, she and I fucked for the first time. Damn, it was good.

That was a great start to this series. You can write any of the three chapters first and then follow it up with the next one until all three are written. You have started a great series about Matthew, and how he becomes sexually active and dominating over his sister and others.

Any Order you prefer, although the suggestion of mom and the neighbor does sounds intriguing. I am looking forward to seeing more.

Loved it!! Very well written & so many possibilities to continue on with. Looking forward to more!

I wood like to read them in MILF Neighbor. xoxo your way

Please!

OOooo....that was HOT! I think sisiter's friends since tyhey are already slaves & willing....then MILF neighbor to help seduce Mom

Definitely looking forward to this series continuing (in any order, but I guess I'd vote for Bets Present Ever: Sister's Friends)

1 Best Present Ever: MILF Neighbor

3 Best Present Ever: Mom

2 Bets Present Ever: Sister's Friends

sex scenes could be more intimate. I vote for the slut's friends

I vote for this one but any you wrote would be great

Friends first then the mild in frount of loser of a son....skip mom

Really enjoyed that and want more so please do sumbit:

1 Neighbour

2 Friends

3 Mom

Superb

1 neighbor

2 friends

3 mom

4 neighbor and mom

5 sister and friends

Great story. My choices are 1) MILF 2) friends 3) Mom

A mouse that roared after nearly 20 years of wussiness? And with an 8 inch plus? Common, man...

Loved the story! It was very hot...it was great to jack-off to!!!

Would love to read about Mom (1), MILF neighbor (2), and sister's friends (3)!

Deacon

love it, would love to read sisters friend next, followed by milf then mom

very well written. please continue with more stories. start anywhere you like.

That's no place to stop.. love that story.. Keep going

Asking us to vote for the next chapters is a great idea. I vote for the MILF as his next conquest. This chapter was a fun read, well written and flowed nicely. Thank you.

For the love of all that's perverted, please write the rest of this series. I think it should go- sisters friends first. He can build up his dom side here and get is harem. Then the milf story. That way he has more expirence with older women and can learn about the plan to get his mom He can also get his revenge on the bully. . Then mom and he can become the new head of the family.

Thanks again and five stars.

I also think it should go friends milf and then mom with revenge on the bully to boot making him know his mom is a slut to someone he used to beat up

She got what she deserved. I'll smash the sister friend next. That accent haunted his fantasies too long.

it would seem like a Logical way to go and easier to Accomplish then the Next Door Neighbor and Last but Mot Least Mom.

An apology to Estragon my great editor...I saw his edit...thought I fixed it, but clearly didn't...a new edit is being sent to fix the error...

Thanks all for reading...and your support...

Jasmine

I would love for this too contnue, it hits all my fetishes minus squirting in one story!!

Loved the story . Hope you will continue. Would like to see many more chapters. Thanks

Great story, I vote for sisters friend(s)

you're on a roll. sister's friends next. good stuff

Great story! Sisters friend is my vote

It's a toss up - Sister's Friends or MILF Neighbor. Either one is fine, just be sure to do both! Loved the story, now please continue.

Great story. Would love to read sisters friends next!

I'm greedy I want all three stories, maybe he can get sis to do dad while does mom, just a thought.

I cum twice and I ate both of them because I got so turn on.

I loved this story. My vote is the mom. Please keep the story going.

Well written easy to read... In my estimation this is so far the best Christmas story...

I enjoyed the character interaction Matthew and Sandra at home before the party...

The interaction between Sandra and her two submissives' Beth and Della added to the story... Finally when Matthew takes control of his sister and the way he did it was very interesting.... The sequence of the followup to the "Best Present Ever" should be as follows (1) Sister's Friends, (2) MILF Neighbor, and (3) Mom...

again I would like to say this was a great story...

Is one of the BEST incest story that I've ever read...

Please continue on with more chapter...

Vote 6 if I can...

great story and I want all 3, MILF, MOM AND FRIENDS, just do it!

The next chapter should be with the mother after she has been seduced by Mrs. Raske. Great holiday story. Keep up the good work.

1st - Friends

2nd - Neighbour

3rd - Mum

Get to it :)

Friends, neighbor, mum for sure!

he put his bitchass sister in her place (on her back, naturally), and proved he's no wuss, and no future cuck

bet the cum-guzzlers hate being shown up by a real Alpha

wonder how this character would do in a "loving wives" segment?

but this guy doesn't even resemble a virgin. Virgins don't torment the object of their desire. Virgins cum almost instantly. Propensity is the word your looking for, not prosperity. Finally, you can't spread a girls legs and the pull her shorts down.

While I realize this stuff is fiction and rarely makes perfect sense, your story is just too far fetched.

1. Sisters Friends

2.Neighbor

3.Mom

Good story but it had nothing to do with Christmas... Because of that it gets a 1

great story, keep'em cumming

best friend,then neighbour,combine them,,,,,,,mother last,cherry on the cake so to speak! add a sprinkling of some more bondage,a bit of cp and more of the lingerie and it will appeal even more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

well done!

Milf Neighbour has to be the next story, But the other two are just as important to keep the whole thing going.

brilliantly written.

i would like to say that i WANT MORE.

Mom last. That goes without saying (that would be the icing on the cake before he returns to Harvard). The other two ... cannot decide which order. OK, Sister's Friends (both) first in readiness for MILF neighbour.

Great start to a story. Thanks.

Hell yeah ! That was awesome. You should definitely continue this story . As to which

you should do first .... Well cant decide , they all sound so deliciously exiting . But if it goes with Sister's Friends hope you include the lab partner! XD

And the others have it right...the proper progression is friend, neighbor, mother...CAN'T WAIT!

...crotchless pantyhose not stockings and garter or thigh highs,,,

IF you are a TRUE pantyhose lover then that is what they ALL are to be wearing...

I liked your story, and if you choose I like the direction the story could go. First one of his sister's friends, the 'Brit' and then the MILF next door, and then finally his own mother? Your certainly are creative. Maybe the MILF and MOM could come together and visit him and his friends in Grad School.

i would like you to contiue the story all three would be the best way to go . the story got me hard

Loved it..made me so wet..love to here about the MILF neighbor

Hey there

loved the story. The order I believe should be friends, MILF, friend's - well Beth's mother then upclose and personal with his own mother

It was so hot!!!!

I would like many continuations to this.

MILF neighbour, then Sisters friends, and finally Mom. In that order please.

ES

All your stories are really enjoyable, this promises to be a really great series. I vote for the MILF neighbor next but think the friends would probably be the next logical choice. I can see lots of hot action in this series a great follow up series would be what happens when Matthew goes back to college can see a lot fun with college girls and professors. Keep writing

Like your story and loved the Dominant Brother Sister theme. Keep that going with deeper submission on sister and her friends part. Get Mom to become his fuck toy as well. Train Dad to be the Dominate one as well taking all of the sluts.

Love to see where you go with this one.

Friends, MILF,Mom....

...but minor errors such as "prosperity" for posterity and "lied there" were a bit of an annoyance. There was very little character development other than a vague sense of intellect for the main character, but no application of it. Also, by your name, you love silk stockings and they are reflected in your characters, but dont write it off as being "unable to explain". It's a fetish for you, so describe what is so erotic about it, the passion will show through in the writing.

Those points would be fine, but coupled with the wooden dialogue, this story will stay at "very good stroke story" but if you were to expand it into series, a little more character development would be great, especially for a master/slave dynamic, as the emotional connection is essential.

Also, as a holiday entry, it was a weak connection, it only felt that it just happened to be Christmas, but I liked the holiday traditions being taken advantage of to further the sexual agenda.

Overall, you still got high marks, but I feel you can do better. Looking forward to future efforts.

Fantastic story, I would love to read more.

I would like to see friends next, I have always been a big fan of the mfffff slumber party type stories.