Another fabulous story from my favorite fellatrix. Your words never fail to leave me smiling and jelous of your male characters. Keep up the excellent work and I hope to read more soon. Until then I remain...
An odd thing to say but what seperates you from everyone else is the intelligence behind the writing. My real job is as a film editor and the most important part of our job is tempo. Cuts need to occur at the right pacing to create the right atmosphere. It is the same with writing and you are the master. The story starts with a slow pace that gradually builds to be almost frantic, as in any decent sexual encounter. It then reaches a peak and fades, the pace of the work rising and falling in time. It is a natural ability that cannot be taught and is the difference between a journeyman writer (or in my case editor) and someone who is great.
I appreciate your excellent writing, and I am thrilled to be picking up so many tips to increase a man's pleasure. I will definitely try these out. I adore sucking cock, but there is always room for improvement.
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Excellent as always
Another fabulous story from my favorite fellatrix. Your words never fail to leave me smiling and jelous of your male characters. Keep up the excellent work and I hope to read more soon. Until then I remain...
short and sweet... yummy too!
loved it! lol.
Simply.....Outstanding!
Lucia is truly a world class fellatrix. GML has written another gem!
Literotica's #1 Fellatrix does it again!
Another smokin' hot story from our favorite Canadian lady. I'd rate it a perfect 10 if the scale went that high!
Intelligent
An odd thing to say but what seperates you from everyone else is the intelligence behind the writing. My real job is as a film editor and the most important part of our job is tempo. Cuts need to occur at the right pacing to create the right atmosphere. It is the same with writing and you are the master. The story starts with a slow pace that gradually builds to be almost frantic, as in any decent sexual encounter. It then reaches a peak and fades, the pace of the work rising and falling in time. It is a natural ability that cannot be taught and is the difference between a journeyman writer (or in my case editor) and someone who is great.
learning
I appreciate your excellent writing, and I am thrilled to be picking up so many tips to increase a man's pleasure. I will definitely try these out. I adore sucking cock, but there is always room for improvement.
mmmmm thanks for the sweet bj lucia that was expertly done.
i like it when you swallow each drop as it spurts into your mouth. love it when you clean up with your tongue though. ahhhh
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I think this is your very best!
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