All Comments on 'Lakehouse'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Needs some editing.

Nice story but it needs some serious editing.

Stephen7RedoStephen7Redoover 12 years ago
You got talent...

Nice hot story. Love the premise. I think you really get into your stories. Now spice them up and tighten them up and you'll have some winners!

Hey, got me going this afternoon...stroking away!

Keep 'em cummin'!

xoxoxoxoxoxoxox

Stephen

belvoriangarathbelvoriangarathover 10 years ago
where are the new stories?

Absoutely love the way you write.

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