All Comments on 'My Amazon Army Ch. 01'

by reynolddd

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redskyesredskyesover 12 years ago
Interesting start

Action at the end felt a bit rushed, but I'm curious to see where this goes.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
The alien dissappeared

I am thinking it is inside of him now.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Read this before but didn't vote

Weirdly it seems a lot better this second time I read it, maybe because I read chapter 2 first and it got me interested again

GoesGruntGoesGruntover 9 years ago
Already Not Impressed With Mandy

Kinda disliking Mandy and feeling sorry for her boyfriend. As far as she can tell some complete stranger with a big dick shows up out of nowhere and she starts banging him.

reynoldddreynoldddalmost 3 years agoAuthor

Thanks for all your comments guys... will do better!

TomdullyTomdully10 months ago

hate stories about old men being made young again but I'll look for your work 'you are a good writer from what I've read so far

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