All Comments on 'My Naughty Little Brother'

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I love pissplay but shit; no!

Fucking sick...

more chapters.

How old are you!?

That was so nasty that I didn't read the whole thing. And which girl could wear panties for three weeks. She would get vaginal infections. I hated it

I tried reading this but I couldn't finish. This is just sick and nasty.

Actually, you're probably ONE OF THE KIDS not allowed on this site.

What the fuck is the matter with you? I

I, too, found it impossible to finish the story.

You're a PIG!

Please tell me you are currently ghostwriting writing Herman Cain's new book. That sir is a story that will be giving me nightmares....

Most disgusting story ever couldn't even finish the story. Ply don't write any more stories

I didn't even get all the way through this garbage before I scrolled down to leave a comment about how you need to find something else to do with your time. Try computer games, or something, because a writer you ain't!

Super gross out factor!

You're an extremely sick and disturbed individual. Please stop writing and admit yourself to a mental hospital.

This story is utter crap,,, didn;t even bother to read to the end,, you are on sick idiot

I think reading all these nasty comments should make you yearn for a nice one. Here it is. People who read stories here should be ready for bodily functions. It does help to warn them of course. I liked your narrator's total lack of shyness. Some girls are like that. Some never get over staining their panties, either. I found your story predictable but the extremes you included made it a lot more fun. Don't let the nay-sayers discourage you. Try some more.

Who is a naughty girl whose head needs flushing in a filthy toilet while I fuck her tight little ass. having scrubbed it thoroughly with a scouring brush first, of course.

Those who called it rubbish were being kind! This is pure, unadulterated, disgusting filth! It has no redeeming qualities.

You need to delete this story now. It didn't get me turned on, it made me almost puke.

Other than a few spelling errors I found this story quite enjoyable. Please, do not listen to negative comments about your chosen topic, people have a choice whether or not they read it. If you don't like it, don't read it!! Keep up the good work.

I loved this story. It was so hot and so real and raw. I can't wait to hear more!!!

Don't listen to others, honestly if Your not into scat and things like this dirty... then you shouldn't even comment, so please go on I loved it

Can I continue this story its still a hot

i wish i was the brother

(Not in a bad way,) People are squeamish, but some people ultimately like this fetish. Consider boobs (just for a second) to be completely taboo and not accepted at all in society, so the only way to get their fix would be to find another source. IE; Internet. Now replace boobs with scat...and you get the idea. To most, this is gross, disgusting, perverted, and shouldn't even be online. Though, to me, it makes me smile and go on and rub myself. I LOVED the story, but if it's not your cup of tea, don't give it a bad reputation because of it.

I'd say, a most wonderfull story.

Nice plot, some interesting characters and the fact you left the age of the kid out (or I must've read over it) was a rather smart move.

Though a small tip for your next time, try to use more capitals and such, it makes it look more proffessional.

And last but not least, this ain't that much of an evil taboo thing...

I've read worse, I recall reading a story which was tagged for; (It's a long list.)

Femdom, Bdsm, Panty Sniffing, Piss, Incest, Brother-Sister, Pedophilia, Muder, Attempt at murder, torture, death, Pain, and around 200 other taboo's...

Also, nobody actually made a bad comment about it, might be the site though. =P

It's a seriously illegal thing to do and isn't taken lightly.

Thanks to everyone that supports my work. I am sorry I was not more descriptive in the warning to some of you and I will change that in the future. Sorry I have had no submissions in a while but I am writing a real nasty mother daughter scat story, so if you want more hang in there.

By your nasty i dont mean the insest that is hot, i mean thenastyness you did with the shit piss, and other,who ever you really are you are a sick little gay fuck

my sister tried that with me once but itied her up and made her suck my cock and eat all my cum it was great she also licked my arse and ate sum of my shit too my dicks 13 inches btw ;)

To the anonymous commentator dated 01/24/12, this is just a story. I hope that what you said about your sister is not true because that is definitely not a right (morally and legally) or cool thing to do and can destroy someone’s life.

to do and can destroy someone's life.

that was great but why torcher him with crap maybe you should pee in his mouth or something like that.

I love this story, cummed over it 3 times this week! xD

Please add more this is fucking hot

You really should write another chapter of this story. i love to read about hot sisters dominating their brothers. You should turn the brother into a toilet-slave for his sister... Hot story so far..

I'm a germophobe... EWWWWWWWWWWWW!

This story definately deserves a follow on! Very exciting!

now i will never ever sniff another pair of panties again! so gross...

eeeeeeeeeeeewwwwwwwwwwww

This is all it is 💩

You should aboslutely write a follow up where she uses him as her toilet.. This story made me cum so hard ;)

damn this shit was fucking nice this made me hard while reading the first paragraph. please make a sequel to this story!!!!!!

WOOHOO! Fantastic story! Cheers from the Bayside haha!

Gay as fck , don't know why asian have blue eye

Made me cum, right another paragraph as I was hard reading this

Hi im 7

Please make more chapters !!!

Please write more chapters where you make the brother the slave. And please make him her toilet slave too...

u r such a nice sister u understand ur brother's hungry

What a load of crap!

OMG The shit part was disgusting

disgusting to me

wow ur a very nice sister i like it

i see what you did there :P

please write the shit-eating chapter!

It wasn't only your brother it was you to but please continue to write more and more

I love brother/sister scat stories and this is a wonderful short one. Made me very hard and wish I was your brother ;-)

Hey I wish I am your bro. Will you adopt me?

Please write more shit eating stories and more and more abuse your bro and please lend him to your friends to feed shit for him. Love you :*

Hey I wish I am your bro. Will you adopt me?

Please write more shit eating stories and more and more abuse your bro and please lend him to your friends to feed shit for him. Love you :*

Chathu Sri Lanka

http://www.eroprofile.com/hardkiller

Make the story longer, shit more and fuck more. I used to test my sister's shit when we were young. I loved it.

it s a horror story like people who like it,sick shit

THIS IS FUCKING NASTY!!! GO EAT YOUR OWN SHIT AND TELL US HOW THAT FUCKING TASTES!!!! YOU PEOPLE ARE FUCKED UP!!!

Omfg u almost made me throw up that's disgusting I geuss it's be use your Asian

This story is great, don't let the fetish haters convince you otherwise :)

I personally love.

It's dedicated to scat lovers only. So if you don't like don't read.

Personally I like it a lot. Part 2 if possible.

damn that was hot k would love to be the one to lick that ass clean ;) please more if you won't post because of haters email maybe...joeydavies90@yahoo.com

It turned me on totally... Brother and sister relationship upgraded by most powerfoul fetish desire ... Sister totally open for brothers desires and sharing the same exitement ... If this hapened to me I'd die from orgasm ... Best fantasy in long time

that the author seems to be no longer active, a part 2 would have been amazing!

but since it's been years since last login, they may have even forgotten they wrote a story her.

Yes please do another chapter this was very hot

Loved reading this and became very hard.

Please write more.

Really enjoyed this - a real turn on

please make a part 2

Happy Birthday Sedienta & thanks for your smelly pussy & ass scented panties . Yes I jerk & cum several times . Hope you ll never find out about it & put an end to my lovely time till you het married soon when your pa ties might begon to stink like the dick of your husband