All Comments on 'Bait and Switch Ch. 04'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
GREAT!!

I check your profile page every 2 or 3 days, looking for the next chapter!! I love the series

redskyesredskyesover 12 years ago
Uhm...wow

Loving the story, but holy hell, his chapter was hot. Wonderful job conveying the raw passion, the intensity. Bravo!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Who are you?

It is nice to have some sense of the author when reading a story. In your case, you are probably male, female or other and probably live North of Santiago, South of North Pole AK, and either East or West of Hilo, HI. Your bio is gotto be a tie for the emptiest one I have seen. For that I give you a 5.0 -- for the story, I do not know yet.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Omfg alien invasion

just when I thought this couldn't get any better ahahahaa. Shanna being a geek was a nice touch.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

This story uses my name and is my biggest fantasy. Hell yeah!

FISHINGDUDEFISHINGDUDEover 5 years ago
Great Story, Reread, but Great!

Love your Writing! Cleaning up emails and finding my Favs once again! You Are 1 Of Best!

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