All Comments on 'Beachcomber'

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MizTMizTover 12 years ago
I Like

This was really different in an interesting way. The whole premise of the girl was such an original idea. Her interacting w/a living human, watching another couple and then hearing her own story, solves her own murder to finally disappear to wherever she was going next.

I hope you continue to write more amazing original storys. I'll be watching!

green2ballsgreen2ballsover 12 years ago
I loved it

Please do not stop with just this one story. You have ability to hold ones attention,.I may not have your gift in writing, I love to read. You have used all the elements and some, to keep me reading. I hope to read some more of your writings.

SmittyNZSmittyNZover 10 years ago
Extremely well written.

I had the impression from early on that it was a ghost story of some kind, but that transcended my expectations. Wonderfully written, and I look forward to more writing in future!

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