All Comments on 'Midnight Girl Scout'

I really enjoyed the pace of the story. I also liked how you didnt spare the vivd details as well. Anyways very hot story, would love to read the 2nd part.

great story the details can't wait for second part

Not very believable. The girl turns up basically gagging for sex? despite being a virgin? despite being supposedly incredibly hot and knowing it? It's all a bit too quick to kick off and isn't clear who is seducing who. Neither character has depth or believability. It's a decent attempt, but the story should be driven by the characters, not the need to get to the sex bit as quick as possible.

Not bad, but maybe include a dog in the story. Where as you are humping the young chickie, the dog is licking it all up. Not a speck of cereal left.

I'm a little like the girl in the story-despite only being a C cup. When I lost my virginity it was to someone way too big-not 12 inches, but eight is enough. The thing is I didn't climax my first time and he was going at me for about ten minutes. The story is good and hot, but it's not realistic,

its a good story but idk why but i was laughing the whole time ...so weird .-.

Silly comments - of course it's not realistic, it's fiction, and very hot too.

Too much like rape, even though she seems to accept it. Is she being honest?