A very fun series.
I thoroughly enjoyed reading this series, and hope you write more in the future, But I wanted to say, reading this chapter I came (no pun intended) across this little jem:
"I smiled a little, 'Well, maybe there's another position you'd rather see me in.'
'Oh, I can think of many.'"
It was so cliche that I couldn't help bursting out laughing. :)
You, my dear, made my day.
Haha, i'm glad the line made you laugh, it was too perfectly cliche to NOT put in.
And I want to thank everyone that was patient with how long this took to write, but I'm glad everyone enjoyed it in the end :)
Loved the story. Thank you.
Waiting with baited breath for more
You did it, curse you!
I had plans for this time of day, but got caught up in what 'came' about by reading a bit of one chapter. I had to read the rest (and did.) As I said in the title, this is definite daydream material.... I had some issues with some spelling problems in Chapter One and sentence construction in others, but the 'flow' of your story line was good enough not to let those overwhelm my interest. Condemn the English major in me.
I wished I could find a pair of magic panties. I have so many panties and none are magic!
A fantastic end to a fantastic story
Another fan that also wishes for such a pair of panties.
This is so sadistic and Rachel didn't help anyone in their transformation.
umm im guessing this is the last chapter, though i would have liked to see rachel get into a actual relationship or hell just being a slut. However i guess she is going to be a complete she and this is indeed the laster chapter.
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