All Comments on 'Work to Fun'

waste of time belongs in fetish for real the gay cuck fetish

I knew it was going to stink as soon as you tossed in the bit about sexy undies and ironing.

Show me you love me? How about she shows him she loves him and doesn't ask him to be a fag?

pack up and run like he stole something. TK U MLJ LV NV

Usually I don't care for spelling errors but this was a bit much. Also the story didn't flow but jumped. You rushed things.

Worst for me, as an anonymous commentor already wrote as well, when you turned him into a masochistic transsexual wimp cuckold. Why marrying a woman when being gay? Wouldn't be with a gay bull fit him better?

What's left? But to kill himself of course..

That will really show'em what he thinks of them

Like your writing. Keep it coming.

And not just with your story line. Either get an editor or stop posting. Your command of the English language is horrible.

...with probably the worst spelling and grammar I have ever encountered. One undeserved star