All Comments on 'Sleeping with Mom'

wow cant believe its your first submission. Well written and just about to get hot mmmmmm

please continue, and hurry, but don't rush <:o)

Its a great story and leaves lot to the imagination at the end. I think you have judged it to perfection.

Hey Baby, it was very nice and I am sure you can do much more than this. It was really nice story with good erotic sensations. I would expecting much more erotic incest and sister with sister and mother with daughter from you.... for this story, don't stop writing and just don't make sex in same bed at same time. Make this story more with explanations and more timing... Baby, mmmmuuuaaahhh from me...

I cant believe this is your first story. You are going to have a great fan base quickly.

Would have given you a five if the story were longer.

But there's not enough written to really make any kind of assessment of what is going on

I'm not scoring this one till you finish it . You have an eye for detail. That much I will allow.

This makes me wish I had lived this story...

O me where is the rest of the story.

Not one word of dialogue! How boring!

This is a fine first submission! It's well on the way to becoming a story of hot motherfucking. The boy is real hard and his mother knows it! His big stiff prick is right against his mom's wet cunt, where every boy'd love to feel his young prick. Momma'd better watch out---her son's got a pair of loaded balls he's gonna want to unload up where it'll do her the most good: right up her motherly twat!

I'll give you a score when you give me a story.

not exactly the way it happened with mom and i ,but it did happen.and it was just incredible.there is no way to explain how wonderful it is to have sex with your mother.and once you start it is never just the one time.Jerry

A very good start and takes a slow pitch. The rest will come; look forward to it.

Not one word of dialog? We don't come here for dialog, Brainiac!

Keep it up - this is good so far, looking forward to more.

A brilliant start to what I expect will be a classic.

A brilliant start to what I expect will be a classic.

I signed up because of this story.

great story, the same thing happened to me when I was a teen, except irt was my step mom, we were traveling across the country, and had to get a motel, same bed and almost same thing happen to me, then at three o'clock in the morning I was putting my rod deep in her, from that point on I have fucked her every chance we get, she is now 80 years old still likes it...

reminds me of how i used to always jump in mom's bed after dad left to taste her hairy cream pies and make love to her properly

No rating for a fraction of a story.

Only one page? I was excited to see more...

Written just as it has happened to many of us ! WELL DONE !NYb1N1

I always enjoy mom son stories. I used to sneak looks at my very beautiful mom as she changed. She caught me masturbating watching her rub cream on her naked body. She was so cool letting me finish to orgasm then handing me a wet cloth to clean up.

Liked the story but it was too short. If the characters werre more developed, it could have been a good story.