All Comments on 'Up the Chimney'

Great story. Love your writing style & all of you other stories as well. Keep up the exciting work!

My my my, you really know how to churn out a hot story, I really liked it. I will most defintely be checking out your other stories if this story is any indication of your writing style.

Thank you from miss Silver766.

Well Done, story seemed not only original but very creative.

Thanks, I loved it and will read it again. Like a manual for excitement.

Though I don't think you need it!

Hot, hot, hot. Maybe my own Santa can find an alternate entrance this year....

Hell, I got so interested I burned my food!

...I can't wait to read the ones it loses to. Absolutely amazing. Well written in all aspects: description, natural dialogue, casual situations, believable premise, and sex that's incredibly erotic without being over the top pornographic. I felt like I was "peeping-Tomming" on a couple, not watching a MILF-hunter video. Well done!

Good work, good writing, good mechanicals (in more ways than one). Good luck.

That was great! I loved the thoughtfulness and description you put into the story! Wonderful stuff!

Absolutely loved it. I really hope you win.

Hope my Xmas eve goes like that! The attention to detail was incredible.

Flabbergasted here, what an awesome anal story you wrote. She was somewhat dispirited wearing her faded red sweatpants and then Santa pulls down her panties and shoved it up her farting, blasting tight chimney.

Fantastic story. I am glad I found your work.

I hardly ever leave comments, but I felt compelled to this time. Very well done, very well done indeed. If you would be so kind, I would like you to keep writing about this couple. Maybe you could skip Easter, but St Pats would be very appropriate.

On the story itself- I enjoyed it, twice. It is difficult with a short story to construct a full storyline, as well as present believable, "real" characters. You did it with style.

On the writing - Without knowing specifically why, I feel the flow was quite good. It was artfully presented without awkward phases or unbelievable passages.

Thanks for great, easy read.

Just wanted to take a moment to say thank you to anyone I might have missed in replying to comments, and to all the anonymous readers as well. All the votes, favorites, and comments are flattering, and certainly encouraging!

HOT!

.....Yes, please!!!!!!!!!

Now I have to go and find an ass to spank! Yes I have something else to take care of also. 5 stars

Unreal - I hope that we can someday remove the un

I always enjoy your titles, butt my favorite parts were the rhymes.