by lovelemur
I hope his father will accept the situation. He sounds like a controlling jerk.
I have been waiting and waiting... I hope you continue this story soon...
the change from running away to jumping his bones is just a little too fast
...what's up? Give it to a group to finish and post the results for us if you don't or can't finish....you invested a lot setting up the characters, drama, potential drama...good foreplay and sex scenes....come on....post something else or enter it for group activity in writing on Literotica. Sheesh...hate starting something someone else has to finish....
You are just going to leave it like this,,,honestly,,,this really sucks...and not fair to the readers..
Please Please do not finish the story here. This was Stuart ng to get good and you just finished it like this,noooo. Please finish it properly mate and all of us readers will be infinitely grateful to you. PS so far it is very good.
You have all the makings of an excellent author... except the follow through! You have a great plot working, with lots of characters you can either flesh out, or just use as filler... the ONLY thing missing, is the REST OF THE STORY!
I know you might be busy or have issues right now or even a writers block but I just want you to know your writing is amazing and it would be a shame if you didn't finish it and let them mate
he is a wolf and can smell his mate, but his father gets fooled into thinking he is out when he is actually in his room? a little inconsistent, either they have superior olfactory or not