All Comments on 'Beastie Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

Great story ....please continue :)

donaldedonaldeover 12 years ago
please continue

was a very interesting chapter please post next chapter soon

sweetie86sweetie86over 12 years ago
LOVED IT!!!!

PLEASE CONTINUE I CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHERE THIS GOES!!!

lovelylasslovelylassover 12 years ago
Wonderful!

Great story so far! Anxiously awaiting more!

katgoddess1katgoddess1about 12 years ago
Very nice!

I hope his father will accept the situation. He sounds like a controlling jerk.

Gizz4mo1Gizz4mo1about 12 years ago
great series

please continue it

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
wonderful start

please continue

defiantbutterflydefiantbutterflyalmost 12 years ago
more please.......

I have been waiting and waiting... I hope you continue this story soon...

angelicbeautyangelicbeautyover 11 years ago

Love the story. Please continue

bowlerhatbowlerhatover 11 years ago
Good but

the change from running away to jumping his bones is just a little too fast

PeepItPeepItover 11 years ago
It's November,2012 and you haven't added to this storyline.....

...what's up? Give it to a group to finish and post the results for us if you don't or can't finish....you invested a lot setting up the characters, drama, potential drama...good foreplay and sex scenes....come on....post something else or enter it for group activity in writing on Literotica. Sheesh...hate starting something someone else has to finish....

countrygirlflacountrygirlflaalmost 11 years ago
THIS IS IT?????????????,REALLY

You are just going to leave it like this,,,honestly,,,this really sucks...and not fair to the readers..

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago

Tell me it's not over I need more

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
come on dont finish it here

Please Please do not finish the story here. This was Stuart ng to get good and you just finished it like this,noooo. Please finish it properly mate and all of us readers will be infinitely grateful to you. PS so far it is very good.

trrgrhppytrrgrhppyalmost 10 years ago
Please come back, and FINISH THIS!

You have all the makings of an excellent author... except the follow through! You have a great plot working, with lots of characters you can either flesh out, or just use as filler... the ONLY thing missing, is the REST OF THE STORY!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Please finish!

I know you might be busy or have issues right now or even a writers block but I just want you to know your writing is amazing and it would be a shame if you didn't finish it and let them mate

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
hmm

he is a wolf and can smell his mate, but his father gets fooled into thinking he is out when he is actually in his room? a little inconsistent, either they have superior olfactory or not

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