All Comments on 'Every Summer Ch. 01'

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Socially_IneptSocially_Ineptover 12 years ago
Interesting.

The woman seems to have a baker's dozen. I am very intrigued. I'll wait for the next chapter to say more.

quiverclawquiverclawover 12 years ago
interesting start...

but whyd you stop there? Who is the woman? who are the kids? are they all hers? lots of questions you could have/should have answered before ending it so quickly.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Typically ignorant of anything or anyplace not american.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
"He meets a Canadian woman who changes his life."

Um, so?

Do they come from some other planet or something?

Or do you just not realise that other nations contain real live PEOPLE?

Mostly people who don't have the insularity of thought of the average American.

arincharinchover 12 years ago
Isn't this an Old Story?

I read this sometime ago,perhaps at least 3 years ago. Why was it resubmitted, there does not seem to be anything different in this version? Or was it copied by a diferent writer?

dirtyoldbimandirtyoldbimanover 1 year ago

YES I like your breasts and big nipples! LOL Her "Aura" has sucked me in. LOL

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