by dualwriter
Seventeen kids and looking for rings on guys. I would be scared if I was Chuck.
I will wait to see what happens next.
The first 2 chapters have captured my need to know what is next:-) I hope there isn't a lot of time between chapters, and especially home that this series doesn't wind up being an orphan with no conclusion, or direction. Keep going please, very intriguing so far!
Nice start. A good variation from the Florida Friends as well. One small point. Canada is larger than the US when you consiider its Northern Territories. It just has less territory that people would like to live in.