All Comments on 'Fated Hearts'

by Gianniana

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Love It

Great job! I love this story. It has an upbeat beginning that pulls the reader in and leaves them wanting more. You have got to write more on this. I will patiently wait for more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
.........

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! <3 (Yes very child/geeky of me)

I shall eagerly be awaiting more.

MizTMizTover 12 years ago
Nice Start

to your first non-human story. I look forward to following Thessa as she seeks out her mate.

DawnzoDawnzoover 12 years ago
OOOHHH I like it!!!

Always a sucker for a wolfy rouge:)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
really really great :)

Can't wait for more

warmicw30warmicw30over 12 years ago
NICE!!!!!!!

like the starting.keep it up

LadySilverNovaLadySilverNovaover 12 years ago
That's it...

I'm hooked. Hopefully ch 2 is written, if not already submitted.

bbarker40bbarker40over 12 years ago
Great story

Hope you post another chapter soon

erin1955erin1955over 12 years ago
brilliant !

that deserved 5 stars.you got me hooked at the begining.which in some stories are hard,dont you think ? but well done you !!!!!!

GiannianaGiannianaover 12 years agoAuthor
Thanks

Thanks guys! The second chapter will be out within the next week. Finals week is kicking my butt!!!

-G

PrimalGinnPrimalGinnover 12 years ago
Hey

A very good start! Don't keep us waiting to much for next chapter! ^_~

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
wow!!

Excellent start! Can't wait to read more!!

cantfightfatecantfightfateover 12 years ago
A good start

but it was short and it's taking you a while to follow up on it. If you continue to do short chapters, I would recommend posting them quickly, like every other day or every 3 days. A longer chapter is also an option.

I hope you can post more.

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmabout 12 years ago
First taste is delish!!!!

I read this a while back and waited to comment. I have loved the evolution of this story. It really is a love story. This is my second read through and am enjoying it immensely. I love that Thessa is a shifter with a powerful will...a warrior woman. She will make a strong alpha bitch.

Thanks and keep up the good efforts.

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