All Comments on 'Mommies Are Great Dogs!'

gave it 4 stars

This was poorly written, has a number of missing words and is kinky bordering on sick. That being said I kind of liked it.

I see my first my first comment and several others were deleted.

And I was polite and giving constructive criticism unlike most...

I can never find a dominant daughter story thanks

keep going, this is really good

I thought this was awesome. I can't find many good dominant daughter stories these days. Nice job.

Please write the continuation for this story

I wish i was your doggie. i would take it anywhere as long as i could masterbate after47ae

adaptation of "Mommies Make Great Pets" by Phoenix Arrow from the website storiesonline.net.

Now will you please do your own original stories. Copycats are not liked so well were I come from.

John

Would LOVE to see these characters develop

Not only is this a cheap knock off of Mommies Make Great Pets, but your spelling and perhaps even grammar is lacking.

And a badly written one at that. No real build up, no characterization, and an unsatisifing conclusion.

I would love to have her make my mom into her dog to, and she could use a real dog to nail my mom also ...

well... that escalated quickly... it was good, but a tad too short and nearly missing the climax

The thing about writing this sort of story is that you need detail and a build up to a climax. This story shows great potential but is just too short for the build up and consequently, for the finale. Sexual detail is a must in these stories as it's the real turn on, yet i found myself getting lost over who sparkly is and how the sex was.

Good start to the story would like to read more including outside play and others help with the pet !

Great story. 10/10.

So... you happen to have dog stuff and expensive dog food and dog bowls ready (in the kitchen no less); ehhhh possible I guess.

Then there happens to just be a riding crop conveniently hanging on the wall? Ehhh unlikely

Then on top of that, you have a dog house out the back despite the lack of dog, plus another “dog” that you’ve kept despite being only 18 and only now it’s being revealed/found? I know it’s just a story but pshtttt, cmon