All Comments on 'Happy 30th B-Day'

by Rhynovampire

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AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Jeeze, why bother??

Another worthless "incest" story, that only fits the genre by the barest (legal only) criteria... Step relatives are NOT real incest. Oh why bother trying to explain... next story and author please...

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
To anonymous

Read the WHOLE name of the category. This IS considered taboo, fucktard!

To RV: well done.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
CRAP!!!!

Wrong Category, she is not his Mother.

This should be in BDSM for all the sick fucks!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
loved it

I want more!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 12 years ago
The author needs to edit the work before posting

("Please, please Daniel, I want it, I need it. I served your mother, I wanto service you. Please...... Master?")

Wasn't it that she served his father?

He was celebraing his 30th birthday, and his mother is 44, that means she was 14 when she had him. That isn't too real.

keairankeairanover 12 years ago
Meh

Your story isn't bad, but there are some discrepancies. 5 y/0 and 17 y/0 doesn't translate into 30 and 44 y/o. Also, the ages did seem to shift a bit.

RhynovampireRhynovampireover 12 years agoAuthor
answers to questions

His mother died giving birth, he was five when his father took his future stepmother in as an au pair Mother 17, father 30, son 5 (+25) = son 30, mother 43, father 55

Alex served his father yes(informally not a formal slave), but father passes a few years ago and she still craves it

rightbankrightbankabout 10 years ago
huh?

how much do you want to confuse people in the opening paragraphs?

He is living with his mom

and

his mother died during child birth

"It's my 30th birthday and I'm back living with my mom, a good woman, strong and passionate. After my divorce was final I was laid off, so I took some writing classes and bought a dictionary and thesaurus. Now was as good a time as any to start a new career.

My dad, Andrew, passed 3 years ago while on vacation in Paris, a heart attack at 54. They were visiting my stepmothers, Alexandria's, parents. They met when I was about 5; Alex was a 17 year old au pair from Belguim, and my father was an up and coming 30 year old contract lawyer, with a son. My mother died giving birth to me."

moving on. nothing to see here.

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