All Comments on 'Match #02: David vs Madison'

I enjoyed this, possibly more than #1. Whether the concept can be stretched to 9 parts without becoming repetitive remains to be seen.

I liked it, though you could make the erotic parts a bit longer. Very creative theme. Good for you and thanks.

This is very good. I am looking forward to the rest of the series.

I am sure the author can write 7 more matches.

Absolutely gorgeous!!i wait for next match!!

Loved reading that! Liked how the girl had a "weakness to penetration".

Suggestion: Add the girls age when you describe them

bluedave1234 ,you showed that majestic of virtues ----compassion on a fellow human being ---in Sanskrit it's called Karuna , in Tantric Buddhism Masculine Compassion coupled with Feminine intelligence makes for immortal Bliss ---Nirvana .

Thank you dude ----your anguish @ her obvious fear & pain & psychosis @ being penetrated drove a stake through your heart -----that's a Godly response to an opponent & i salute you brother ---God Bless You !

Nice idea.