All Comments on 'Tick Tock'

Initially I thought, "Not another stupid student blackmails teacher story". But this one had that extra something that made it work. Well done.

Loved the story please continue

Why is it that half the people here who come up with interesting themes don't have the education to string a sentence together? 'Smothered her skirt'? I've heard of being dressed to kill, but ....

This could be a great story. It does need some proofreading, though. Besides the grammatical errors, your first paragraph is in third person while the rest of the story is in first person.

A great story that I thoroughly enjoyed. It is short, arousing, and to the point.

Andy the errors made are nothing more than spellcheck getting it wrong, absolutely nothing to worry about. I loved your writing style and your subject. I found the tension arousing and hope you follow up with an equally suspenseful part 2.