All Comments on 'The Road'

This was just a load of crap. A total waste of the few minutes i spent reading it!!!!

While I don't quite agree with anon, I do think you could've lengthened this by a great deal. This story finished barely after it started.

@anony - Would have been great if you would have said how can i improve or why u didnt like. thanx for the comment anyway

@kieran - thanx for the feedback. will certainly try to elaborate it a bit next time around. do read my other stories as well

Hiya sarhad! Don't let stupid trolls get ya down. I liked it a lot! I agree though, it could be longer! I love horror erotica (never enough in my opinion).

I liked the siren song calling of the guy, and the overall plot. I wish it was longer because it was great! That said, there's nothing wrong with a dark, quick and dirty, sexy story!

Keep rockin and writing. Always happy to be your Volunteer Editor if you feel the need. I would love to read more of your stuff, and shall go seeking now!

xoxo

KD

I guess.